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HI GUYS, CAN ANYONE GIVE ME SOME ADVICE ON THE MIX AND ARANGMENT
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COMET SHELL
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Posted : Sep 17, 2013 23:10:13
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Orbika
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Posted : Sep 18, 2013 14:05
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Not bad. I think you can skip the break part at the end of the song and at the point where it starts (the last break), the track should finish with the low cut filtering. |
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Grevinsky
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Posted : Sep 18, 2013 22:14
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Hey man.
K n B sound tight!.
The white noise is abit harsh at 1.58 .
2.18 it doesent sound so well with that reversed kick, maybe you should resample it or timestretch it or something. A crash would be nice there.
3.14 is nice change but abit sudden. I would suggest to add some rise or something to make it more progressive.
Now when i listen i think you should mix the white noise abit better over the whole track.
3.41 its kind of strange with that break, it kills the drive a bit.
The moving lead around 4.30 could be abit better eq´d its abit muddy now and the square synth does not get enough space(in this section).
All over i think its a cool song, you could work little more on the progression and what else i noted down here.
Its the longest piece i heard from you!, and i like it! 
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killik
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Posted : Sep 19, 2013 11:36
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hey Comet,
nice to see your progressions over the months.
Grevinsky already pointed out some important things.
the kickbass is very tight but i miss a little lowend action.
40-60hz.
keep going, i like your style
:O!
http://soundcloud.com/killik |
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COMET SHELL
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Sep 22, 2013 00:08
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thank you guys, il adjust a few things and finish it. thanks for your help
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