| Author
|
hey people here is a preview of one of my tracks
|
Rukiwärsch
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
12
Posts :
24
Posted : Jan 3, 2011 17:24:46
|
|
minus
IsraTrance Full Member
Started Topics :
103
Posts :
1614
Posted : Jan 3, 2011 20:17
|
pretty nice work mate,small,but nice,work it more man
bomz
|
|
|
knocz
Moderator
Started Topics :
40
Posts :
1151
Posted : Jan 3, 2011 22:35
|
Nice job.
You could work more on the breaks, interacting with the percussion parts and with the whole track. the last 2/3rds are very similar but it should go somewhere.. With the breaks it's easier to change the sounds and to introduce new parts (smaller changes -> smaller breaks).
But as you said, it's a sample from your track, so without the whole piece it's hard to put in context.
Sound wise it all fits together, it sounds good 
 Super Banana Sauce http://www.soundcloud.com/knocz |
|
|
|
Rukiwärsch
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
12
Posts :
24
Posted : Jan 4, 2011 00:47
|
|
Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
Started Topics :
91
Posts :
529
Posted : Jan 4, 2011 01:56
|
Hi, here my review:
-I dont like it doesnt has an intro.
-After the break @0:52 you need to stop those "zaps" imo and then repeat them in another small section, actually they are over ALL the entire track!! Really that sucks 100% (dont take it like an offence)
-@2:50 I was totally bored because of the lack of instruments (leads, pads, riffs)
You totally need to work more on variation and progression, also do not use FXs as leads! it gets pretty boring and monotone.
ProtoDrive https://soundcloud.com/protodrive |
|
|
|
Rukiwärsch
IsraTrance Junior Member
Started Topics :
12
Posts :
24
Posted : Jan 4, 2011 02:19
|
okay I know what you mean, and I accept your opinion, but it is my personal style.and I think that if you hear....
I will not make psytrance like any other! but everyone just has a different taste in music! thank you anyway for your tips
|
|
|
|
