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Hey!! new track 145bpm chill, psychedelic
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synthlab
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Posted : Oct 14, 2007 21:42
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It isnt 100% finished because I wanted to get some feedback from people here so I can improve the track. Please keep in mind ive only been making music for 2 months now.
I know its not trance, I didnt really want it to be, but it is pretty chill so sit back, relax, pull out that finely rolled J, and crank up the bass.
http://media.putfile.com/Zion-Part-1
If you like the music, feel free to add me to your friends on myspace, and I'll be sure to check out your tunes as well =)
www.myspace.com/synthlabmusic
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synthlab
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Posted : Oct 16, 2007 04:03
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On 2007-10-14 21:42, synthlab wrote:
It isnt 100% finished because I wanted to get some feedback from people here so I can improve the track. Please keep in mind ive only been making music for 2 months now.
I know its not trance, I didnt really want it to be, but it is pretty chill so sit back, relax, pull out that finely rolled J, and crank up the bass.
http://media.putfile.com/Zion-Part-1
If you like the music, feel free to add me to your friends on myspace, and I'll be sure to check out your tunes as well =)
http://www.myspace.com/synthlabmusic
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My bad heres the correct link:
http://media.putfile.com/Zion-Part-1-52
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Mrsufi
Sufi
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Posted : Oct 16, 2007 22:34
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Nice this is realy layback - rollin a spliff- sunday afternoon music i liked the piano do u play it ?
But i think u should add stuff to make it more intresting
because after 1.30 u have heard the whole track (its only my opnion ) because the track otherwise is great
http://forum.isratrance.com/sufi-playground-morning-full-on-145bpm-some-comments-plz/
Keep it up bro i will add u to my space so i can chill on your stuff sundayzz
And keep doin what u doin 
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Eliyahu
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Posted : Oct 17, 2007 02:35
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Nice Quality... but i have to agree with Mrsufi... you need to make some changes to make it more interesting
sound a bit like a playback to some vocals this way.. |
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synthlab
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Posted : Oct 17, 2007 02:50
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Cool thanks for the feedback guys. what do you think i should do? add some more effects here and there? or add a different melody in the middle and somehow come back to the original line towards the end?
Also some of you may have noticed the song changed a good amount in the last few bars, and i was thinking of going off in a different direction after that point. (like i mentioned earlier this song is only 1/2 way finished. shooting for about 7 min)
Anyways, i would like to hear from some more people as well, before i start making big changes. the more feedback the better!
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Eliyahu
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Posted : Oct 17, 2007 13:22
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Hmm... I think maybe adding some crazy percussion and changing the bassline can help..
i feel like the song is progressing to a main part but the main part just wont come... |
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