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s0l
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Posted : Sep 10, 2009 10:33:52
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s0l
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Posted : Sep 10, 2009 23:20
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I know they aren't full songs, but leave some feedback people. |
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ayalien
Ayalien
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Posted : Sep 15, 2009 14:38
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Ok...to be honest, it sounds a bit dirty for my taste. specially the second track (cheak your levels...no red!)...And your samples are really too short! it's hard to have an opinion on your work with this. It's easier to give an objective critic on an entire track...Basically, we can judge the sound quality, but not your skill as a compositor...You can have a very nice part but not be able to manage more than 2mn without loosing the energy of your track...It makes all the difference i think.....So, give more!!
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s0l
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Posted : Sep 16, 2009 15:11
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Thanks for your opinion, sir. |
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s0l
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Posted : Sep 16, 2009 15:14
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I do agree that it sounds very choppy and doesn't seem to flow together. You have to take into account that i am new to this whole thing. With more time and practice i should be able to compose a full song that flows together more efficiently. |
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ayalien
Ayalien
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Posted : Sep 17, 2009 11:08
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Don't worry, everyone who listen to your music here are aware that you start to make music bro, this is the workshop area! It's nice from you to show your work from the beginning....I know many (and talented) guys who just keep their tracks for themselfes because they are too much affraid by the criticisms...But you're not.
You look motivate, sure you'll be able to make full song soon with this kind of spirit.... Let's hear your progress! All the best man...And keep enjoy making music..BOOM
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