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Here's a tune I'm working on. Just searching for a critique of what I have so far
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Ayaosa
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Posted : Dec 5, 2012 01:52:31
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PsiloCybian
Mammal Footwork
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Posted : Dec 5, 2012 09:47
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-the intro is cool 
-the deep kick stab or what ever it is on the transition is tooo loud 
-for my taste this is a way to low of a bassline
-dont like the snare it sounds like something i would use in dubstep
there you go, hope it helps
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B-recluse
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Posted : Dec 5, 2012 13:24
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hey bro ! for me its still sounds a bit basic to be honest I agree with psilocybian that your bass laks of power ! you could do with some fx like ( sweeps , atmos, ) not bad but there is more possibilies with your track ! just listening it by yourself and just think a sound what comes up in your feeling ! make it a bit more interesting ? good luck brother ! The only way is up ! |
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