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here's a track..... tear it apart.
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dreadieg
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Posted : Feb 12, 2011 20:51:07
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this isn't all that great, but i figure i'll give it to ya'll for opinions.
i'm thinking of scraping it for awhile then rewriting most of it. |
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Midnight Sun
ProtoDrive
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Posted : Feb 12, 2011 21:17
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To tear it apart??
hehe  OK then:
-Intro is nice but for some ambient/downtempo music.
-I dont liked the kick sound and how it comes alone.
-@1:41 lacks of energy, I mean the idea its kinda nice but without good EQ sounds cheap.
-Bass its too much on the background aswell as percussion. Bring them front.
-I liked some of the "goa-ish" sounds.
-The breack was going good with the voice sample
but you killed it @3:45. Work more on entrances.
-I dont like the lead @4:18. Also I think it plays too long.
So in conclussion be more creative and listen well to your sounds, but I heard some nice things.
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dreadieg
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Posted : Feb 12, 2011 21:47
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awesome! much appreciated.
i haven't done any EQ whatsoever at this point, so i understand entirely.
and agreed with the last lead, i messed my patch up :/
back to work!! |
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