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Posted : Sep 18, 2012 00:29:17
Hi, people of earth! and other parts of the galaxy!! I been trying to make fullon music for a while now, and Im really working in my mix and overall volumes, I try to make the bass the main character in my story!
I would love to know what you think!! If maybe im pushing it a bit to much! or is it starting to sound better? I hope! cuz dec.2012 its almost here, and I need to improve alot before that!!! so any tip or advice is more than welcome!!!!
Well I hope you have a great day!! and a cool week!!!! peace!!!
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Posted : Sep 18, 2012 00:41
well i heard it, i liked it althought i found full on music a bit too commercial, but that's just me - the lead around 4:45 is a bit upfront blocking the rest of the track, don't you think?
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Posted : Sep 20, 2012 07:08
Hi, thanks man, I have not notice that!! I guess I could reduce the level on the lead!! thanks for listening! have a great day!! thanks for your time!
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Posted : Sep 21, 2012 04:24
You got talent but the cheese factor went through the roof on that one. You probably need to do more than change the mix... :/
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Posted : Sep 21, 2012 15:20
Thanks and yes, the cheesiness in this track did jump the fence!haha! But I would definitely work in my mixing and try to leave the cheesiness out of the room!, thanks for listening!! Have a good day"!
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Posted : Sep 21, 2012 19:45
the vocal at around 4:00 seems to conflict with the synths and bass. (and what's up with the cheesy vocals anyway )
it could very well be my speakers, but aren't the kick and especially the bass missing a bit in the sub department?
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Posted : Sep 23, 2012 05:01
Hi, yes the bass is missing a bit of subs like you say, I was hoping to give that extra boost in the masterization, thats why I didnt leave it very fat!! and the vocals are indeed very very cheese hehe I know cheese is not very acceptable this days, but Im trying to make darkpsy too, so its like the other side of the coin! but thanks for listening!!!! have a cool weekend!!
what are you using for your bass. I suggest you use a single osc for a sine wave and tweak it along with the current bass you have to give the subs a bit of a boost.
Try cutting the vocals and other sounds around 200hz this will avoid it conflicting with the bass and the kick. Also a bit of panning can help coz too many sounds placed in the centre.
Ok again about the vocals.. the transition from the meaningless "do you wanna dance" and then the very serious dmt dude doesnt fit at all. go full cheese.
and yes, the cheesiness in this track did jump the fence!haha! But I would definitely work in my mixing and try to leave the cheesiness out of the room!, thanks for listening!! Have a good day"! 
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the transition from the meaningless "do you wanna dance" and then the very serious dmt dude doesnt fit at all. go full cheese.