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HELP!!!(ur opinion)138bpm
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diskOtek
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Posted : Jan 11, 2006 01:32
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piko_bianko
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Posted : Jan 11, 2006 13:19
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diskOtek
Entek
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Posted : Jan 11, 2006 13:40
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okz!
sorry+comin back! 
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diskOtek
Entek
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Posted : Jan 11, 2006 19:37
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djNexon
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Posted : Jan 12, 2006 12:58
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diskonekt
Fat Data
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Posted : Jan 12, 2006 16:56
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Hey man what's up 
Not a bad track for your third try.You got some melodic (a bit ambient) synthlines and pads , creating sort of a dreamy landscape there , i dig man.
What i'd like to hear though is more variation ... for example till the third min. track doesn't change much ,and there aren't many things going on there ,so spice it up a bit so as to keep everyones interest till the -very nice and melodic- final part of the track.
I'd suggest also to stop using the fruity's drumloops they've been kinda overused eheh  Better make your own ones
All in all good try keep it up man,cheers!
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diskOtek
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Posted : Jan 12, 2006 17:51
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thanx alot guys for ur replies!
hey age_of_panic!i see what ur talkin about
for the variation especially in the beginning!
but also i need to know about the structure..
i feel its like two different tracks till the third min and after it...
so anyone give it a listen and share his opinion?
thanx
ps:i can only agree with you for the drumloop!
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orange
Fat Data
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Posted : Jan 12, 2006 19:56
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yeap i agree with age of panic track needz more variation and some fx to make it more interesting !!
i dont sey not to use the FL loops but they are realy obvious and overused but if you like them use them but at least abuse them so they cant be recognized
overall nice work you have some potential for sure!!
keep them comming
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diskOtek
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Posted : Jan 12, 2006 23:35
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thanks man!
overused u mean in the track or generally?coz i ve used 1 only!
any other opinions?
cmon share!!
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