hierophant3
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Posted : Mar 6, 2012 21:10:01
Hi ISRA!
Need your kind feedback with the track. I'm quite new to this; so, any feedback from you is very welcome to guide me in the right direction.
Looking forward to hear from you!
Thanks!
WhySoLazy?
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Posted : Mar 6, 2012 21:17
Love your Intro
hierophant3
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Posted : Mar 6, 2012 21:39
WhySoLazy?-
Thanks !
hierophant3
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Posted : Mar 6, 2012 21:41
I also wanted to add that i wanted feedback about how the mix sounds, as i don't have good studio speakers; the music has been made in 2.1 speakers without any midi controller/synth .
hierophant3
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Posted : Mar 12, 2012 09:55
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aje
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Posted : Mar 12, 2012 13:33
Musically I like this one a lot!
Since you ask about the mix, the mids and high-mids are too loud on my headphones here, or in other words turn down the synths, especially that disto guitar-like sound that comes in at 4:40 for example is way too harsh. And right after the break at 2:00, the percussion is kinda out-of-sync, but that could just be Soundcloud artefacts. And I would use a warmer kick maybe, that would make the whole track sound warmer. I hope that helps!
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Mar 14, 2012 13:06
Im with Aje on this one, musicaly i like it also, u need to work on the mix a bit, put every sound to zero, put the Kick at a volume u like, them the percs, bassline, and the other sounds around it, this is how im working now and it feels right
hierophant3
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Posted : Mar 22, 2012 19:52
aje & Nomad Moon - Thanks a lot for the feedback! ...still a learner and i dont have good speakers to get a good sound...i would really appreciate it, if you can advise me on making my kicks sound warmer...Thanks a lot again!
jizy
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Posted : Mar 22, 2012 23:05
your kicks sounding warmer? eq saturation compression eq (maybe none if my kick sound good from the synth or sample but, eq wivout a dout
along side that, this warms things up for me sumtimes, as mentond in another thread
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Posted : Mar 23, 2012 11:47
your kick do sound warm here, im sure u don't need to overwarm it
well, keeping in mind u don't have proper monitoring, the track sounds very clean and balanced. musically it is ok too!
i think u have problem with that hihat loop that u play thru the whole track.first try to bring some diversity. at least cut / edit it a bit after the break. also it sounds sharp, thin and dry. open hat is ok, but that sample is shite.
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hierophant3
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Posted : Mar 27, 2012 23:04
jizy- thanks! will have to try that!
makus - thank yo so much for the feedback!
i agree the hi hats, snares, etc. need some diversity....any help, insights, clues on achieving that??
jizy
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Posted : Mar 28, 2012 00:21
try lol, where do u get you money from! haha. na it was ok anyway the kick i was just sharin that plugin. comprssion and eq is more than enuff for trasnsient and tonal warmth. sumwhere at 400-600 eq wide q gives the warmth dont it, if it needs it anyways,,,, sounded like ya already knew anywaY
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Posted : Mar 28, 2012 09:38
hi! nice long intro, i like it! if you're serious about this stuff you should really get those monitor speakers, its worth every penny i used to make music also with 2.1 setup and i had always problems with the music sounding different in every setup. but this song sounded actually pretty good, at least on my headphones! :-D
hierophant3
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Posted : Mar 29, 2012 20:48
jizy- ...thanks for the help!
dronetic- thanks for the feedback! Yes i am very serious and passionate about this stuff; but, i somehow cant invest in something right now .... and yes, would love to hear your music ...
...thanks for the help!