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IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Oct 14, 2013 08:22
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hey dood, first if its your first ever try, its a pretty good try, you have decent understanding of flowz, and u r using the sounds and breaks wisely,, but for somme constructive critisizm...
first the intro is nice, but the transition to kick/bass part don't fit,, u need to introduce the kick,bass nicely,,put more into it,,use ur swooosh'sh, hit etc whatever...kick/bass/percussions sound pretty decent enuff to me, and u r building your sounds nicely say in 1:40 - 2:20 part... now the kick rolls u r doing,,, u need to reduce the volume of the kicks when u rolling them,,, when u will reduce the db there,,, the whole db level of your whole mix will come Up... right now the most prominent peaks r at the rollz... u will need to get those down a bit,, sso your whole track levels rise up,, I hope u understand what I mean,,, rest sounds decent enuff, u r using breaks nicely,,, but say around 3 minute mark,,, u r deleting the kick every 8 bars or so,,, it kind of gets boring,, maybe u need to put in some rolls, fills, and use less of that,, maybe every 16th , once in a while,, but its your taste, do what u like, I think its decnt enuff, peaceout
p:s- next time pls post direct link to your track on soundcloud,,,, not just your soundcloud account link,,, but the link to the track,, so we can just click play,, instead of opening your soundcloud separately. |
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