You're def starting off with a good feel for creating a powerful kick/bass relationship, I like the bassline for sure. However the initial lead that comes in doesnt seem to fit, perhaps the tuning is off? Also the drop at 1 minute seems to loose a bit too much volume, perhaps increase the decay length of the delay/reverb, or compress that segment (or if you wanted a breaky feel, add a stab sound to help the bar end). The middle of the song has a nice fluent melody that works with the pluck bass quite well however you loose me towards some of the bars at the end, perhaps more coherency in the melody, or less song length, not sure.
In general thats pretty good for only 6 months of producing. Really clear sound (im assuming its not mastered), but just a few areas at the end gets a little muddy. I would improve on effectivly using misc sounds such as fx/upper's/downers/stabs/etceetc, variations on your percussions (you had some nice kick fills, but perhaps more percs with them) and overall coherency of your song (but who am I to say, my tracks go all over the place). Keep at it, I wasnt nearly as progressed by 6 months!
Thanks man. I PMed you. Your right, it's unmastered. I appreciate all of your compliments and criticism. I also signed up for your stuff on soundcloud and am eager to hear more work from you.
Taii
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Posted : Apr 5, 2011 19:09
Really nice work for 6 months:)
I agree it should be a bit more coherent.
Just keep doing it and you'll get better and better, i think))
Btw, is it just me or is the kick sometimes ok and sometimes very loud? I dunno what could cause this though, maybe make more room for the sounds?
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