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heeey sssuuuup brothers...Heres a little track.....hope ya like it
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fro2010
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Posted : Dec 2, 2005 08:24
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fro2010
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Posted : Dec 2, 2005 19:08
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ahh c mon dudes...i need some opinions for this track
need some critics |
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fro2010
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Posted : Dec 5, 2005 00:06
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well i guess ya ppl dont like my track...no feedback??? c mon i need some coments good or bad ... if ya dont like it tell me what you dont like please
(salud) haha |
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IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 5, 2005 16:54
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sounds realy cool.Nice production.
You should do something with the bassline.
It is stacked in octave mode.
Make the bassline sequence bigger and more complex.Full on is based on that.
Try one octave lower if u r messing with hardware it will be boosted.
You could also play -1 note with your base bassline sequence and try to give more progression.
Xmmm,too many happy phrases..it isnt crying enough
It also needs something for progression fill in the rythm like the one that plays in the end
Your rythmic elements are played well |
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Bizzarro
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Posted : Dec 5, 2005 19:18
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Yes
good production and also some nice sounds
bassline could be a bit more modulated and better i feel
not much of a fullon fan
but can appreciate and analyse
soo boom
keep it up and keep at it
Review mine..?/
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fro2010
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Posted : Dec 5, 2005 20:35
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thax for the feedback dudes...yeah ill check on the bassline ones more ive done some changes since a finished it...i wast that satisfide with it . so i just tried to boost it up with a chorus...im going to work on the prgress of it too
thanx cheers from mexico |
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