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darclon
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Posted : Feb 5, 2004 13:58
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CLAW
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Posted : Feb 5, 2004 15:50
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Well I have to say that from the drums and bass point of view I give u a 10!!!
But as far as the others (background sounds - fxs etc) it seems that u need a bit of work... Volumes are a bit down, try to use some delays, compressors in order to give "colour" to your track...
Over all, I have to say that u r on the right way...
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darclon
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Posted : Feb 6, 2004 00:06
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cool, thank you CHP for the nice feedback! yes your are right. the bass and perc part i worked most time on since i started to make music. the rest in this track (sfx, melodies, etc) was just added in a sleepless night...
where do you think should i add more compression? on the sounds themself or on the overall mix? and whats about the delays? can you give me some more tips?
btw, i updated the sound file... |
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CLAW
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Posted : Feb 6, 2004 03:46
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Well, not necessarily to the whole mix, just pumed up a few sounds by giving them a kick in the ass (compressor)
You have a few sounds dont rememver exactly in which part of your track that with a bit of delays etc, they will make them sound more intereesting and atmospheric...
Anyways, thats just my opinion, maybe others like it the way it is... Bassline & percussions are on the right way...
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Posted : Feb 6, 2004 11:35
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listening.....
the begining needs some more work if u ask me.
Great contrast between reverbed and dry sounds.
the delay is bit out of sync.. maybe fix that?
the mix sounds solid. the drum loop might be a bit thin - I like them full of pressense.
interesting melodic idea comes in at the end.
Crackling universes dive into their own neverending crackle...
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ashleylovesslurpees
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Posted : Feb 8, 2004 05:46
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ya that's a smooth bassline.
good stuff.
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Posted : Feb 8, 2004 09:38
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nice kick+bassline...
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