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Happy Birthday Track
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gamadrop
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 10, 2006 18:36
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I made this track on the day i turned 18...
actually the next morning during my hangover....
but yeaaa...
its a new track...
hope u guys like it..
review plz
http://www.sendspace.com/file/aoal22
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aXis
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Dec 10, 2006 19:19
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Yo Go BRO!!!!
This track is really cool man.
Im sure ull make better very very soon.
all the luck |
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gamadrop
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 12, 2006 22:47
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wat i dont get is...that out of all the people on the forum...axis is the only one with a brain...who understands the word...'REVIEW'...that means post some shit people...i dont care if its totally irrelevant...
like wat the f*^)...it says 50 people have viewed...but all the 50 people cant not have fingers...to type a godamn line or two...
watever...i dont care anymore |
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Posted : Dec 13, 2006 06:02
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ok .. real time review
cool spacey pad intro , i miss a crash when the bass comes .. decent fx .. around 1:30 ..picks up .. a bit .. and the kick and bass is lost in the mix .. then another sequence .. some confusing atmosphere there .. ok .. over all , good idea but poor execution .. more percussion needed , the breaks are very plain and boring , need more then kick roll and crash .. build more elements leading to a breakdown , u need to clean the mix and add more well structured leads , i keep loosing flow when listning the track .. also the bass .. what have u used .. this sounds like a sine .. well maby u like .. im a fan of the sawwy sound tho .. try changing the waveform .. all in all . good ideas , and seeing ur age .. only 18 , very young .. keep going and working on it .. like axis says .. soon u will wil make better .. dont give up .. every failed track teaches u lot .. dont lose heart and keep on it .. 
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gamadrop
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Dec 13, 2006 17:00
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ther u go...
god bless u man....and thanks alot...
reviews like urs really help...
and yes....im not pro...but im workin towards that...and also im using only fruity loops and shitty computer and a shitty soundcard...
sooooo yeaaaa...once i start actually workin seriousely....u'll c how i will rip earth part with my vibrations...hhaha...well atleast i'll try to...
muchos gracias and muchos appreciando hombre
bom |
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playtek
Playtek
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Posted : Dec 13, 2006 22:08
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cool bro  |
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mk47
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Posted : Dec 14, 2006 06:51
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thats a pretty decent attempt m8 , yeah sound could be better but using fl has nothing to do with that  . with time ul get betr if u stik to it ..
peace
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