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haaaa my First try 148 bpm :p
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Ghost Host
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Posted : Feb 4, 2006 22:17
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insane
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 01:48
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brother..
ur making the rite stuff .. originality... thats imp.. an u have that..but,
1.58 the melody that u fit in, makes the sound very diff(softer)maybe some harder synth wud make it better... else, i think ur contructing well enuf.. need some padss.. to give some story to the trac.. too much phaser effect imho -thats starts after 3.00 min ...
else-production wise,its super..
can bring more and more power in this..
keep making bro..abt time ur brutal thoughts came out,,
share with us too 
boooom!
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Ghost Host
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Posted : Feb 5, 2006 13:08
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On 2006-02-05 01:48, insane wrote:
brother..
ur making the rite stuff .. originality... thats imp.. an u have that..but,
1.58 the melody that u fit in, makes the sound very diff(softer)maybe some harder synth wud make it better... else, i think ur contructing well enuf.. need some padss.. to give some story to the trac.. too much phaser effect imho -thats starts after 3.00 min ...
else-production wise,its super..
can bring more and more power in this..
keep making bro..abt time ur brutal thoughts came out,,
share with us too
boooom!
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Jigar brother really apriciate your replay.....KILLer 
U know that U one of my favarite artists and your coments really motivate me to work and work and work.....hehe, hope that's will brings some results later 
..yop gona try some pads and make it more energetic with effects, but damn that melody u talkin about is really freak me out on original Monitors sounding  ....but well i can try to change it maybe too...
Thx brother 
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Ghost Host
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Posted : Feb 13, 2006 21:18
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Freeflow
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Posted : Feb 13, 2006 21:29
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nice starting point, you need some variation in there...
some more contrasting sounds.. some more leads maybe... to tell the story
thats my opinion... but otherwise i liked the ideas..
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Ghost Host
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Posted : Feb 20, 2006 02:47
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On 2006-02-13 21:29, New Era Scientist wrote:
nice starting point, you need some variation in there...
some more contrasting sounds.. some more leads maybe... to tell the story
thats my opinion... but otherwise i liked the ideas..
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u damn right dude!
..was workin on it a bit and finaly it's soundz better 
well maybe still need a lot fixes hehe, but PLZ guys gimme some Feedback 
http://ns30078.ovh.net/~witch/witch/Witch%20-%20Super%20Human.mp3
thx in advince 
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Nomad Moon
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Posted : Feb 20, 2006 14:47
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I agree with New Era,tha kickbass,effects and all other parts are very good ,just didn't like the synths,maybe u could make them more Talamasca type but heavier if u know what i mean  !?
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spiral_9_project
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Posted : Feb 21, 2006 10:56
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nice trak
gud combination of nite and morning
btw r u trying 2 make morning or dark ???
its a lil repetitive make more variations
chnge d sequence of ur main lead from time 2 time
wich cmes in @ 1:44 its constant throughout the trak
peace
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Ghost Host
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Posted : Feb 21, 2006 13:19
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Thx for replays dudes
originaly idea was to make it Dark, but i really don't know what hapends with me... it's just comes on that way 
i guess with more experiance it's comes on the way it's should be.
spiral_9_project agree with ya tottaly about repetive part, but this track is not really product of creation, i would say i learned on it defferent technics and just to get understending of how it's all works.
so hopefully next 1 gona be on defferent level 
once again really apriciate your replays 
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