panike
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Posted : Mar 28, 2011 22:16
é a tua primeira musica de sempre ou já tinhas feito outros sons antes?
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Posted : Mar 28, 2011 22:58
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On 2011-03-28 22:16, panike wrote:
é a tua primeira musica de sempre ou já tinhas feito outros sons antes?
He asked if that was my first track EVER.
No, I used to produce ambient and chill, now entering the world of psy-trance production. What you think?
Em português: Produzia ambient e chill antes, essa é minha primeira track de psy-trance... O que achou?
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panike
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Posted : Mar 29, 2011 00:12
Very nice for your first psytrance track, but I tought that was your first track ever.
its really nice and smooth.
the intro is so trippy
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Posted : Mar 29, 2011 01:56
Wow, I really like it! Sounds very professional!
Edit: Love the Lost sample!
makus
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Posted : Mar 29, 2011 09:44
if i were you i would start rolling bass earlier.
there is something with bass and kick, they are sub boomy, but lack the real bass frequencies in 60-100 hz range a bit. need to check with analyzer though, cause now i'm judging roughly by ear.
if i were you i would bring out some leads, fx sounds, percussion and snare (which you lost somewhere) closer to the front and make them louder and more present. kick and bass are too emphasized - listen to the track from this perspective and you will get what i mean. make the music of the track louder
some leads and pads are quite thin, that's okay if there are many elements playing together in the mix, but check those places where there aren't and make them fatter.
other than that the track is very good. just fix some mixing issues and release it.
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Posted : Mar 29, 2011 16:20
Panike and Matt_j, happy you guys like it!
Markus, many thanks for your tips! That's exactly the type of feedback I was expecting from posting here. ;-)
Volume of kick+bass X the rest of the track is something that I am struggling a little at this point. I'm afraid that by lowering the K+B the track will start to loose punch, but maybe that's because of the missing bass frequencies you pointed out.
Will try to fix this issues.
And glad you like the track overall! Ambient explorations -> www.flictmusic.com
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Posted : Mar 29, 2011 16:36
@makus +1
I'd love to hear you playing two or three more synths on this with higher presence..
build up those 2 or 3 synths, something like a detuned FM'ed saw waves with nice filters, delay and reverb +eq (tipical synth) or with some flanger of anything to make it different, and map it to a midi keyboard, until you have a piece of hardware that you can play on.
Then, play on top of the track while recording yourself, acting crazy on the equipment and spilling your guts out, to get one full length track per synth you built (it might take a couple of takes to play them right). This should take you from 1 hour to a day to do, and when you're finished you have a couple of cool new elements, that breathe "yourself" with tons of expression that evolves over time, that you can use on your track. It's just a matter of mixing them together (if you have 3 now channels, try not to play them all at the same time, simple is better), bringing them in or the chorus parts and anywhere you think needs it (like to spice up a fill)
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Posted : Mar 30, 2011 18:08
Knocz, cool idea! Will implement!
Mark, checked the EQ on the bass. The only cut I have is exaclty at 133Hz, about 3db with a broad Q. Do you think that can be the problem? It's not on the frequencies you mentioned but maybe the broad Q is the reason?
I was thinking that maybe the kick was the reason... I don't think it has a good low end but it was the one I had when I started the track...
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makus
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Posted : Mar 30, 2011 20:13
