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Goa trance track - need feedback on my work
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Fresh no
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Posted : Jan 22, 2012 18:00:07
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Hi all,
I work on Ableton and for the moment I need some feeds about my track (general feeling, structure, levels and mix). It's not mastered so it must be improved.
Thank you all & Cheers from France
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Fometrius
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Posted : Jan 22, 2012 19:36
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Ok im listening now 
Feels like a tech direction in the beginning .
Now the base gets going, nice atmos and gated choir.
At 3:32 its gets more nice, more intense and more feeling.
Around 5:00 it gets a bit of a mysterious vibe, which is ok.
Overall impression , its a nice track
The mix feels ok, im no expert though.But i got some knowledge. Other people can give you more comments about that. I have not discovered any volume levels though that struck me to be to high or low.The hi hats could have some more punch though i think.The snare feels ok, maybe a bit thin but that is about taste.
I like the leads.
For constructive critic:
I personaly would not use the samples about acid, for me it feels a bit overdone. Like its been done 1000 times before. But hey that might just be me
The hi hats could perhaps be a little bit higher in volume for more drive as said.
Some pads could also grant some thickness.
Overall nice work !
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TuneUnit
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Posted : Jan 23, 2012 02:52
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Nice tune! i realy like the intro, has a nice emotional quality! but i have to agree with the previous poster, using samples about acid feels abit tired and ready for retirement.. this tune holds it´s own without us beeing told its psychedelic by Albert. Its hard to use spokenword samples over all i think. like someone once said, and im parafrasing: "either it has to be the most briliant thing ever said, or just total nonsence, else it will not work".
now that was all i had to complain about ;P Greate tune! |
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Fresh no
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Posted : Jan 23, 2012 22:51
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Thank you so much for your listening
I'm glad to read your comments, you're right for the sample and it is not also a good quality sample. But it's the concept (the story)! I will delete the first one and cut the second one, to try yes.
I don't know but I have the feeling that souncloud compress the wav file, true?
So I will continue to work, still thank you |
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psysutra
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Posted : Jan 24, 2012 01:43
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Decide man- or "Progressive Trance Psychedelic" or "Goa"
For me, it's not goa... Not bad track, btw
However, I didn't found some spectacular element which would force me to another and another listening... I'm so fussy- no offence - just my opinion:) |
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