sidra
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Posted : Jun 1, 2011 21:17:41
Would love to hear some feedback!
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Posted : Jun 2, 2011 12:03
real nice work mate, full old skool feel, with new bass workage l ove the part at 7:20! real nice.
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sidra
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Posted : Jun 3, 2011 17:26
Thanks, we have quite a few more tracks in the process of being written
aciduss
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Posted : Jun 3, 2011 18:50
Hello. Your track is not bad. Good oldschool melos and feeling, very groovy basslines. Some stuff i dont like:
- Too much kick retriggering. I miss other percussion fills and sometimes other kind of tricks.
- Some stages seem really energetic but lack of percussion (like 5:10 and 8:27)
- Sometimes the mix is like a wall of sounds with delays and reverb and strings and ambiences, maybe that is your desired effect but i find it hard to focus on something in particular.
Thanks for sharing.
ArcaneInquisitor
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Posted : Jun 3, 2011 19:04
for the first couple of minutes the low end seems kinda thin. The kick drum doesn't have much bass and neither does the basslines (which IMO sounds like it is struggling in the mix)
But in the rest of the song once that initial bassline is changed up it it sounds thick and rich in the low end.
Like as said before, the percussion sounds are often lacking or burried in the mix, it might help to give them a bit of compression or something for the climax parts.
Psybro
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Posted : Jun 4, 2011 07:18
You did a wonderful job guys
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sidra
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Posted : Jun 7, 2011 09:04
Updated Version, we took what was said on the board into account and made some improvements.
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Posted : Jun 8, 2011 14:42
nice percs in the second part of the track, love the second brake and the third part of the song. Nice tune
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