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Give your opinion!

SilmarJr
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Sep 26, 2010 19:22:33
Hey guys!
I'm new to music production and have a small sample of the track I'm working! And I'm posting it for you to listen and tell me what you think, for me to improve even more. Criticisms and suggestions are welcome!




Thank you and sorry for my bad English!
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aciduss
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Posted : Sep 26, 2010 20:27
I like it bro, it is very nice for a starter... wish my tracks sounded like that years ago hehe.

It sounds good, perhaps it could benefit from introducing more sounds and of course some synthlines in the next parts of the track.

I will comment on the soundcloud app specific stuff

Keep on the beat dude!
SilmarJr
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Posted : Sep 27, 2010 01:41
Thanks for Reviews and Opinion!           -
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Obelizk
Amoeba

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Posted : Sep 27, 2010 05:41
Is that VB1? hellz yeah.

maybe add some more of the lows back to the vb1 or use rbass or maxxbass from waves plugins to bring some more of it out. It sounds really clean now though, so keep it sounding clean while accentuating the lows.

You have a great beat going, and the hats sound great.

Then start adding some leads and mess around with breaks.

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SilmarJr
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Sep 27, 2010 18:36
is yes I use is for beginners VB1 think is a good size, I do not venture into much more complex synth, because I do not know much about synthesis!
I'll follow the tips and you'll work most of my tones and my score!

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Plasmorh
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Oct 3, 2010 13:29
u have like.. less then a year of production right??

its good make more and more.. things will come out as u work...

plur           I want a spare brain.... or 2.
SilmarJr
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Oct 3, 2010 19:43
I'm a little over a year in production, more in psytrance less than a month!
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daark
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Posted : Oct 3, 2010 19:48
realy nice!           http://soundcloud.com/magimix-1/chilling-forest-whispers
Wierd shit happens :)
Fometrius
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Posted : Oct 3, 2010 22:00
Nice stuff,really liked the base being throwed in your face in the beginning,felt very nice.Everything is great if i would complain about anything it would be that i would like to have the first baseline longer before it changes at 0:42,the baseline is really phat
SilmarJr
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Oct 6, 2010 20:25
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Syncronik

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Posted : Oct 6, 2010 20:38
very good for a starter!

nice base, powerful and fast
maybe you could introduce some more energy on your track and make it more dynamic

right now is a solid base with delayed sounds on top, but you are in the right way... keep working on the dynamism and energy of the track...

good job!
SilmarJr
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Oct 7, 2010 14:46
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