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girl robot - clearer skies 2.2
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andykisaragi
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Posted : Apr 30, 2004 14:27
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motorik
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Posted : Apr 30, 2004 15:19
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i Remember listening to the previous track you published and love it very much .
I like your psychedelic sound that probably come from your psychedelic mind. 
The bass line is to high and not heavy enough to my taste , also the kick is not powerfull enough.
but all the sounds around (sfx and precs) are very good made and nice mixed 
I love the melody chords that comes at 4:30
after the break , the bassline pattrn after that break is also very beautiful and fit the ambience (but again with better sound it could be even groovier than it is now).
all in all i love your style many SFX like i like good structure that keeps the tune intersting even though it is a long tune .
keep going this way just make your kick\bass more powerfull (IMHO)
salute
motorik
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andykisaragi
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Posted : Apr 30, 2004 15:37
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thanks for your nice words motorik
i will try to work on making the bass/kick more powerful, i think that's the main thing i have problems with really..
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Triptocoma
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Posted : May 4, 2004 19:31
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You got me groovin real hard.. hehe
nice track, indeed.. i can only agree with motorik!
" like your psychedelic sound that probably come from your psychedelic mind. "
a inspiration indeed.. i like the dub style it´s grooving into..
now to some constructive critisism..
and other ideas..
i think the song is morphing between sounds very good, they are well choosen and interesting but i think you should go over it again and see if there is some space you could make less busy or not bring everything in at the same time, and maybe put a gate on the deep voice thats humming in the background, at 1:50. That could be cool....The Elctrified reverb effect is neat, nice transition thats starts at 3:50...though you could automate the volume of it, some fade out at 4:20, it dosent sound good like it could do, sounds like too much resonating in these speakers... or its just my ears 
also the dub section could be even drummier in my way, to raise the tension..
at 6:21 you bring everything back up again at the same time almost, you could make something even more interesting, something like bring the sound thats starts at 07:16 there instead, or give a hint of it in some way.. if you get my drift
i think it would lose the tension up and work as a good climax if you work more on that sound...more variations of it.
So some sort of re-arrangement in the end could be cool, but remeber that its your vision, im just giving you some ideas..
Also i would maybe hade changed the baseline to something else in the end, mostly its the voice hum and the baseline that could use a shift.. they sound very similar to the start section, except the baseline is fullon now
Also the mix needs to come up some more! so check your levels and take this song the another level 
Laters
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