psyraal
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Posted : Sep 22, 2012 02:30
hey bud, i listened to it, thought the intro is just a bit too much cheesy, you know, music is supposed to be heard and one shouldn't think of the personal (in this case global) problems while listening to it, so my guess for that is just try re-thinking the intro a bit, create and innovate. the rest of the track developed nice, but didn't quite achieved the climax zone, just stood there holding the gun and never really fired..
Galaxy Machine
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Posted : Sep 22, 2012 19:03
Thanks psyrall for giving me your feedback.
I further tweaked stuff, chopped the intro samples up a little, added a few atmospheric layers here and there and some accelerating kicks. Edited some volumes and next i will try to build some more drama into the first and second part..
SpaceAlpha - http://soundcloud.com/galaxy-studio
