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xrust
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Posted : Jun 10, 2008 21:04:46
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a3k
IsraTrance Team
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Posted : Jun 11, 2008 22:59
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wellm, it has a positive vibe my friend, thought i believe at sometimes it repeats to much same sounds, maybe a little bit more variation?
the rest is nice, keep up, and make it just a little bit more twisted    ... |
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diskOtek
Entek
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Posted : Jun 16, 2008 15:55
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i like it but it's not fast enough..sorry.
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gutter
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Posted : Jun 17, 2008 15:50
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nice work xrust 
one thing i would like to say is to lower the small hat volume which strikes with the kick
sounds too much , like annoying high freq.
its usually needed in lower volumes
rest is yours
i like this too ,, keep writing music 
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Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Jun 18, 2008 23:39
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damn...144! it kills my kneees!
I was expecting a melody or something like that, but it didn't came. IMO you really need that before 2:45, something to focus on your track. Central melody\fx...
Nice dreamy pads & sounds after the first break
Sounds like a different track after the long cut break. Didnt like your precussion work there as well. I think the melody is fine there, but more work on it needed.
Heard stuff much much better from you man!
sorry for the bashing, but its for a good cause!
Misha
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X.O.
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Posted : Jun 21, 2008 07:59
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very well
but small some mastering problems
and bad dynamics because high friquences sounds are very similiar and amount of then small(i think they must use more often, near 2 time, and it must be 2 different samples with different speed of repeating).
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xrust
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Jun 21, 2008 14:16
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thanx guys for the comments,really helpfull 
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Crystalien
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Jun 27, 2008 12:57
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tight kick, monotonous bassline (is it "never changing"?;*), percussions are suitable but frequences are incorect.. synths in some places good, other places not... i think you miss that "something special" in this track, to make it catchy
best wishes, as always - i say what i hear
Crystalien
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