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Full on try with kinda psy attitude...judge yourself..
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Suloo
IsraTrance Full Member
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 00:43:25
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Freeflow
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 01:54
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Hey man! i would have listened if i had a faster internet... but that wont help much now =) hehe
cheers...
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Suloo
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 01:58
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what is the problem? is the file too big?
12mb or so..check it out @ home...would be very nice to know your opinion actualy...
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Freeflow
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 03:20
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Hey Zork!  okej i got it now, it didnt take that much time actually..
I have listened now, second time as i write, will listen again of course!
So my first impression is that you got a lot of creativity and you want to make lots of changes and have motion! that is great and good thinking!
Though the downside is that i think your creativity gets spent on too much "tricks" as i call them, and you can easy lose the thread! (so firstly its good to focus on the musical side and flow)
You got the groove in the baseline and you got some cool sounds in there, the melody sound is a sound you could improve by adding some layers of other sounds to it or spice it up with some FX, like chorus or flanger just to make it wider..
i think this could become a real nice track!
but you need to stop listening to all this generic fullon that has a break every other 16 to 32 bar.. you need to get the drive going and try and feel the flow.. In my opinion of course...
the weird melody at 3:35 could benefit from having a pad underneath it and also some more FX on it, and dont change it so drastic to another melody form/shape... you should keep going with what you have and expand or take away from it(or add FX to different notes), or if you make a short break with something that will turn the world upside down so you can get away with such a change.. otherwise its difficult....
all and all nice sounds and ideas, but the structure and arrangement needs to go through some thinking and finding a flow... In my opinion, again..
Also you should add more percussion, a 16th hihat.. some shaker, or just anything that can spice up the perc parts...
This is my opinion for now after some listens, of course tomorrow i could have another idea, Hope this helps you in any way and that you can continue the work
Cheers
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Bleja
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 03:38
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i think that you need to improve your track by adding dynamic - hit hats, percs, small synths and that kind of details |
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Suloo
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 05:17
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ok, thanks a lot for the detailed suggestions Freeflow!!
more layers and Fx at certain times would be great if done right for sure..
like to vari the sound all few parts, to not get too static at all right..
its kinda bounce the sound and cut it in the end at 16th or smth...then delete some and loop some...for more flexi trippy sound..i think i know what you mean...will try a few things and post it back
thanks
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Suloo
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Posted : Sep 24, 2009 05:21
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but you need to stop listening to all this generic fullon that has a break every other 16 to 32 bar.
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hehe..yes indeed..i hate it actualy when im on the dancer and all this breaks come close to another..no trancing at all..will try to improve with less breaks..maybe just down pitch at some points and start a new bassline..like in
Drum & Bass for example..
some nice ideas already Flow pretty Free
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klippel
Stereofeld
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Posted : Sep 27, 2009 18:27
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hi mate,
i like the track. nice sounds overall and i also like the flow, not too many breaks for my taste! nice feeling to it..
make it a little "denser" soundwise concentrate on not too many key sounds and melodies and it will be a funky track..
post upcoming versions
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add some more fx and give it the finish
http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel
"I've always been a believer in musical repetition to draw in the listener and make the music hypnotic. Another thing I believe in is repetition." Alan Parsons |
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