D_Access
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Posted : Nov 12, 2011 23:55:57
Hey everyone. Last time I've uploaded this track's demo a some time ago and got various feedbacks. So, check this one please. Any opinions appreciated.
Galaxy Machine
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Posted : Nov 13, 2011 02:05
Very nice production, but it gets a bit repetitive after a while, beside the "pop'ish" style
I would make the voice a bit more artificial and place it on the intro and breaks... but that's just me.
D_Access
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Posted : Nov 13, 2011 04:41
Thanks I know that's commercial, and i still like it. I like pop full-on, that's the matter of taste By the way, can you give me any particular advices on the mix? Cheers
dj chichke
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Posted : Nov 13, 2011 14:24
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By the way, can you give me any particular advices on the mix?
It's, but i'll try. Your mix is pretty balanced but evertyhing need to be brighter.
1. I would raise the kick and bass at least 1 db.
2. Raise the midds of the vocal. I cant tell you exactly where, you need to check with eq what frequency make it sounds better.
3. lead at 2:45 : i like this lead. but it should be more in front. take out some low midd frequncies and raise up some high midd.
4. 4:04 : Same thing for the lead in the background. You want to make it shine!
5. 5:00 : The vocal and the lead are not set long together well. Try to make them work better together.
6. Raise up a lot the high frequencies at you hats and crashes.
