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Full-On morning psy (demo)
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warlock
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Posted : Aug 16, 2009 11:36:55
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hi guys....my first attempts at morning psy..it aint complete....i still wanna add a few one shot sounds.. also the last final breakdown needs to be written...
wanna hear some comments and feedback on the music, the mix, everything......
http://www.sendspace.com/file/bsgmsu
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warlock
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Posted : Aug 16, 2009 11:41
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ahh one more thing..... the track is not mastered... n no processing on the master.... |
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Freeflow
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Posted : Aug 21, 2009 01:03
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Very nice... though i dont consider this morning psy... but you can play whenever
the mix is nice... some proper mastering would show otherwise, so finish it 
Still its very generic psytrance, but i guess you allready knew that
I think you got a little twisted system going on here..or at least south african sound hehe
keep up the good work 
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warlock
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Posted : Aug 22, 2009 08:37
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hey freeflow thanks for the feedback
ya i do listen to a lot of south african stuff.... but the tune that comes in at 3.24 made me think that it had a little morning touch to it... n so i thought of calling it mornin psy ....but for sure the aim was south african twilight..... was thinking maybe ill remove that tune n complete the track in a more full-power south african fashion..... lets see how it goes...
once again thanks for listenin to the track n givin me ur views.......
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*eLliSDee*
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Posted : Aug 23, 2009 11:57
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only little critic i may have is the repetition of that "bell-drop" sound on the right back side through the 1st part (starts @1min) might benifit from a little dynamic change/automation perhaps, but i dont no how result will sound, so if u like. or maybe go an ocatave up every 4th,,then again maybe not. The way that sound is now it attracts a lot of attention to it self. it takes some focus away from that awesome lead that start @1:30.. i was listening on headphones though
nice clean sound for a pre-master version..
i agree its not morning but whatever,, I like it lots.
Good work
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warlock
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Posted : Aug 23, 2009 12:50
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thanks for the feedback eLliSDee.....
a friend of mine also noticed that 'bell-drop' n said it attracts too much attention.... so maybe it does need a fix.... its nice to hear ppl sayin the mix is not too bad...glad u enjoyed it..
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*eLliSDee*
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Posted : Aug 24, 2009 10:06
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Hey,
U should consider to invest some money for mastering. It is a good idea to have a second pair of ears do it and the song is worth it.
I would be very interested to hear the mastered version when it is done.
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warlock
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Posted : Aug 26, 2009 07:21
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hey eLliSDee....
Like i said earlier im thinking of remaking the track in more s.a style n power,..... not changing the whole track....jus removing certain 'bright' elements and adding twilight squelch... IF i do manage to complete it the way i want, i'd like to put the track up for release and usually these days the record label takes care of the mastering.... have always been fond of the labels in s.a.... So lets see if one of them accepts it ....If not then ill put some cash in n get it mastered with Timecode so i can play the track in my sets....
lets see how things go...
cheers buddy
P.S anybody interested in taking the track as a V.S , let me know |
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warlock
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Posted : Aug 30, 2009 08:22
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so many views .... but so less reviews ...lol
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carbonic
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Posted : Aug 31, 2009 13:07
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Hey I listened to your track. Good take on the genre I would say. What I don't like is maybe that the track is like 'rushing'! But maybe that's what you wanted . Otherwise nice twisted/morning/twilight sounds up there.
I have a progressive demo posted if you would like to check.
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infectedsilence
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Posted : Sep 2, 2009 13:06
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Hey m8..veeery good job in the song...is that your first?
what progs are you using? |
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warlock
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Posted : Sep 3, 2009 16:36
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hi guys thx for the comments .... glad ull liked it..
this is not my first track...i have been experimenting with production for the past 4 yrs... but this is the first time im posting any of my music.. this is my first attempt at twilight music... since i like the twisted s.a sound a lot i thought id give it a go ...
programs used - cubase sx3 and fruity loops running as a vsti ....n of course a lot of other vst plugins...
anybody else dig my sound ????? |
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Uedi
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Posted : Sep 5, 2009 22:21
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It's a cool track. Not my type of sound, but cool.
I don't consider this morning!
Tends more to night full on
Some proper mastering will pull out the sounds.
Give more definition to the elements and more brightness to the medium-high range.
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psydraulix
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Posted : Sep 7, 2009 22:41
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All the right elements are there for sure. Good bass and nice patterns, I do like the way you construct the song. I suppose it definitely needs some pro mixing mastering but that's not so much a criticism on the track, just a reality...
Things that stood out: bassline and synths all seemed leveled properly and have the musical aspect some amateurs don't.
The percussion line seems a tad underworked, maybe have some more variety in there, the hi-hat for example is a tad weak, not bad, but not in your face enough for my tastes
Look into compression, side chaining and the good old sound maximizer
 Peace Love Unity:
Respect. |
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warlock
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Posted : Sep 8, 2009 08:04
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hello ppll..... thx the beautiful comments.....
really helps u know that ur doin things the right way...
@ Uedi..... 'Give more definition to the elements and more brightness to the medium-high range.' ??????
sorry bro im still learning the technical bits of music..but if i understand u correctly u mean give more sharpness to the track ..like adding more brightness to the percs?? would really be cool if u can explain a lil bro thx....
@Alien Zed..... sup yo!!!! hehe thx for the feedback!!
percs i can work on ..n come up with somethin more real n creative...side-chaining so far have use only on bass n still have to try it on other sounds...
compression... no compresssion on a single track .. i know i should try n give it go
sound maximiser...isnt this jus like a extra vol plugin thinge??????
cheerss... |
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