Full on Forest (new theme on a previous track) Need feedback
Shunpo
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Posted : Feb 16, 2012 13:04:06
Hello to all psy lovers
please give me some feedback anything good bad doesnt matter this is important
Oh by the way have a nice day
stomerij
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Posted : Feb 16, 2012 13:52
the last breakdown doesn't feel that it belongs there and the track loses a lot of energy.
the parts are very good but don't flow too well togheter. if you work harder on the arrangement and finish this you could try your luck on nano records
Shunpo
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Posted : Feb 16, 2012 22:12
well, thanks for commenting this track is still on its beta phase
this is the older version of this track then i wanted to change its full theme i will consider your advices thanks again
sidra
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Posted : Feb 16, 2012 22:33
The track is really fun and funky. I enjoyed it overall. Some of your noises sounded like they needed a bit more eqing...it was just a little harsh. And yeah there is something about the break that makes it loose its energy a little bit. Some more atmosphere would be good. Otherwise, really awesome.
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Shunpo
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Posted : Feb 17, 2012 00:00
@sidra yeah definately more atmosphere will do good in breakdown, maybe some guy explaining quantum mechanics or a cool movie quote im glad that u liked it btw may the force be with you, always