D_Access
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Posted : Mar 12, 2011 11:49:38
Any opinions appreciated. Also if anyone could give me an advice how to make guitar fit better to the all mix that would be really great-)
daark
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Posted : Mar 12, 2011 12:34
Hello friend Now this is MY opinion don't take too hard:
1) crash ,first second ,doesnt fit at all start calmer. Chillout more with it on the rest of mix but mainly at start.
2) The bass rising you need to bring it down before the bassline starts going on or there is no "boom!" at all at 0.40 hp or lp, volume down your call.Same at the second break AND bring like a maniac man!!!
3) the guitar as it is a small riff loop. i would suggest to bounce. Chop it. Delay it. Pan it.Filter it. Make it alive.And bring it even more full at the ending part.
4) Lead - Filter it and delay it.
Because the sound sounds same all over too much.Some parts are good and just leave some parts like that.
D_Access
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Posted : Mar 12, 2011 17:42
Thanks man, I'll try to fix it:)
Any other opinions?
dj chichke
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Posted : Mar 12, 2011 20:10
agree with everything that daark said.
replace the crash. it's not good sample.
the guitar deosn't sound good and i think it's too cheasy so you can feel free to get rid of it.
the lead at the break (not the pad) is very thin and annoying. change it.
4:17 : this uplift from vengeance right? i used it. and i heard many more using it after (liquid soul, faders, and more...
any way you need to work more on your groove elemnts. they are not sharp enough. change your kick to kick with more low bottom. tha'ts pretty much what i have to say...
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D_Access
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Posted : Mar 12, 2011 21:55
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On 2011-03-12 20:10, dj chichke wrote:
4:17 : this uplift from vengeance right? i used it. and i heard many more using it after (liquid soul, faders, and more...
any way you need to work more on your groove elemnts. they are not sharp enough. change your kick to kick with more low bottom. tha'ts pretty much what i have to say...
What do you mean by the uplift? If you mean the rise up sound - than it's not a sample or preset, I've made it myself with a pitch LFO on a saw and a square synth.
By the way, what about a bassline and main lead? Are they ok?
Thnaks for your advices and sorry for my English, I'm still a newbie in all musical terms
dj chichke
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Posted : Mar 12, 2011 23:21
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Posted : Mar 13, 2011 02:58
yeah I like the pad chords at the intro and the bass and kick sound good to me !
D_Access
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Posted : Mar 13, 2011 03:19
Thanks everybody. I'll try to make it better in several days
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Posted : Mar 16, 2011 09:03
The bassline sounds good. The melody gets too repetitive. Make it more emotionally dramatic. As it is, the melody conflicts with the tension in the bassline. The melody should add to the tension of the bassline and enhance the intensity, not subtract from it.
D_Access
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Posted : Mar 17, 2011 13:05
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On 2011-03-16 09:03, veridia wrote:
As it is, the melody conflicts with the tension in the bassline. The melody should add to the tension of the bassline and enhance the intensity, not subtract from it.
Sorry, i don't get it Can you explain in for dummies?
D_Access
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Posted : Mar 19, 2011 21:31
So, here is tne new version of this tune, hope you like it Again, please post your comments
By the way, does the mix really sound "plastic", like if it was done in FL Studio, or it's just my imagination?
panike
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Posted : Mar 19, 2011 23:59
happy song, i like it dude,its much better then the first version
D_Access
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Posted : Mar 20, 2011 08:11
hp or lp, volume down your call.Same at the second break AND bring like a maniac man!!!
