harryohm
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Posted : May 5, 2011 01:21:47
Greetings !
another one from me. still under construction started yesterday, have come so far. Hoping for feedbacks and suggestions.
bOM !
THANKS ! AND HUGS ! XD
Oni Katsu
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Posted : May 5, 2011 02:33
This was really entertaining and interesting actually.
I do not know what the other members think but i think this track is quite great, its like some sort of intense ambience or something.
harryohm
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Posted : May 5, 2011 08:59
hey baba !
thanks for taking the time and writing !
thanks for appreciating, i really didn't want to label it into a genre while i was making the track was making just because i was feeling good while making it.
My skills have long way to bro, still a noob boob XD
thanks again bro !
But any tech parts that i should get right ?
vipal
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Posted : May 5, 2011 09:12
very nice work. intriging. and with such a specific style hard to tell what to do with, maybe the end is a bit too full. keep them coming.
harryohm
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Posted : May 5, 2011 10:28
thanks vipal ! for having a listen and for your kind words. =] Will keep your suggestion in my mind.
cheers !
aje
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Posted : May 5, 2011 14:53
Kewl, sounds kinda like ambient full-on listened through a thick opium haze, or something like that, hahaha
Like the listener above said its hard to give any specific feedback because it is such a unique kind of sound, and in its entirety it makes all perfect sense to me, even though single elements could of course be improved.
harryohm
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Posted : May 5, 2011 18:07
thanks for your kind words aje, I am just noob man.
long way to go. just enjoying the ride and expressing myself however i can, with all the limitations i have.
thanks again for appreciating and writing bro.
respect !
love and light.
hahaha thick opium haze ! XD
minus
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Posted : May 5, 2011 23:04
kaisa hai mere bhai, the sound is comming along real nicely, nice sunriser kindoff sounds, i think you should use a little more crisper leads along with the colour sounds, and some more pumping percussion work, otherwise the soundscapes r real nice, and flowz is koooool, keep at it homboy,nice work
ka boooom
harryohm
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Posted : May 6, 2011 15:20
Quote:
On 2011-05-05 23:04, minus wrote:
kaisa hai mere bhai, the sound is comming along real nicely, nice sunriser kindoff sounds, i think you should use a little more crisper leads along with the colour sounds, and some more pumping percussion work, otherwise the soundscapes r real nice, and flowz is koooool, keep at it homboy,nice work
ka boooom
O bhaijee ! badiyah !
app batao yara ! XD
like i tld you before man i suck at writing leads. but will surely try and get somethin more crispy and crunchy.
baba ji ! need tips regarding percus man. but will try an implementing better and groovier percus.
thanks for listening !
since you don't do FB, you msn ?
bOm !
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Posted : May 7, 2011 01:03
jeeboomba
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Posted : May 7, 2011 05:04
neat... setting of atmos is nicely done.. +1 on leads and perc work..
love the spacey reverb on sounds.. great work here.. keep em coming.. :cheerz:
re-arrange what you thought was real
loki
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Posted : May 7, 2011 07:44
yeah, i like this. that bass is sick, like sensient took a lot of cocaine. in a good way.
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harryohm
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Posted : May 7, 2011 12:44
thanks for appreciating P.tale, jeeboomba, loki !
@loki -
bOm !
jekvan
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Posted : May 7, 2011 13:10
Really awesome man,good shit right here..I really liked how you captured the essence of spacing out the beggining of the track,and slowly bringing itin your face...The listener slowly falls in your carefully laid trap,and then you wake him up,and it done nicely..
My personal remark which isn't worth even 0.0002 is,the reverb tail in the beggining,on those farty leads is somewhat strong and has almost percussive sound.Other then this,don't know really what to say except this is what I'm gonna hear when I light my dooby next time.
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