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Fresh Tune For A Morning Walk

ND
ProSect

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Posted : Feb 13, 2004 11:45
hi dudes

got new morning vibes for you, some progressive goa sounds.

ACT: Sound Field (Prosect And Wombat Panic)
TRACK: Inside The Pattern
TIME: 08:07
TEMPO: 130 BPM

Direct Download Link:

http://kortner-hasting.com/prosect/Sound%20Field%20-%20Inside%20The%20Pattern.mp3

any feedback will be nice, enjoy.           Without Deviation, Progress Is Not Possible.

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Mindfly
Mindfly

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Posted : Feb 14, 2004 14:23
Uhh...me likes a lot!
Excellent work - very funky indeed. Makes me wanna dance!           
You are beautiful, no matter what they say!
kukan-dub-lagan/ItaiTaiko
kukan-dub-lagan/ItaiTaiko

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Posted : Feb 15, 2004 12:38
nice man...
good build in
try IBOGA maybe...or other prog. label..i think that it is nice enogh for dancing
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Trip-
IsraTrance Team

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Posted : Feb 15, 2004 13:35
loved the melody man
dunno why 130bpm - but going smooth

I dunno why I feel like I want to hear tb303 in some place....
After all I like the warm feeling.

actually - hooray for the melodic idea man - haven't heard many do it today. specially not in 130 bpm.

soundwise - 96kb/s isn't much but sounds great.
          Crackling universes dive into their own neverending crackle...
AgalactiA
ND
ProSect

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Posted : Feb 16, 2004 21:20
heya

thanks for feedback!

mindfly, yup i got strong funk influence in my tunes.

and kukan man you are not first to say that i will try Iboga, i still wait for their answer on my other work.

yo' trip i don't know myself why 130. i started to make it as totally progressive tune, but before that i heard 2 goa cds on my stereo and that what happened thanks i try to do my best and make music that a bit different from what we hear this days...
sorry for demo sound, was lazy to make high quality demo.

anyway soon the remix by prosect 133 bpm...          Without Deviation, Progress Is Not Possible.

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ashleylovesslurpees


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Posted : Feb 18, 2004 00:10
nice track, i thought it got a little to busy in a couple part's of it... matbe it's just my taste

ash
Qualium


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Posted : Feb 18, 2004 15:01
Hmm - great things here but could do with a bit of reshaping (IMHO).

Very yummy start - it pulled me right in from the intro and got me bubbling along in the groove effortlessly.

However, I found that the build from around 2:40 is far too much - the track suddenly has all these screaming high synths which hadn't been called for. As Asley said - it gets a bit too busy. And I'm not too fond of the actual timbre of one of the highs either (the one that starts at 3:13) - a bit too 'plastic squeaky' (it's just an aesthetic judgment). I'd say it's also the kind of portamento you're using and how you're using it. [EDIT Just listened to it again and it seemed to me like this section would make a perfect climax, but it's four minutes too early.]

It then cools down a little and gets a bit repetative until about 4:27 - the track might have done well with a little more exploration here, or maybe even a bit of shortening, as the drop back was long overdue.

Then from 4:27 until about 6:09 it drops back to that bubbling groove. I really enjoy these bits (this and the intro) - they're the best parts of the track IMHO.

And then all of a sudden the screaming synths again to finish off the track. They don't work for me here either. There wasn't really anything leading up to them to hint at the possibility for that kind of change. It's like trying to shift up a gear and skipping one - it's too much of a jolt. There needs to be something to build some tension.

Do realise though, that I'm going into a bit of detail here because I think there's real potential in your work - the parts I like are just my cup of tea thankyou, my kind of groove - but I just wanted to give you some honest feedback because I know it can be valuable sometimes. And of course, this is all just one guy's opinion about something very subjective.
ND
ProSect

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Posted : Feb 18, 2004 18:05
Qualium i must say you review really touched me. You just noticed about "bad" points in the track , exactly where i was afraid of listeners notice it and knew and be aware of them.

let's get into the review a bit:

the built at 2:40, the leads, yup i digged it a bit and decided to left it like that. can be better built in. 3:13 i think u talking about the melody, i enjoying this sounds kinda different. the cool down section at 4:27, may sound repetative, but i didn't wanted to finish it suddenly.

i got your mind, you didn't liked the sudden build-ups. anyway you couraged me to back to this tune (maybe) and make some fixes. and add it to the cd i will send to iboga or other labels.

thanks dudes.
keep on playing           Without Deviation, Progress Is Not Possible.

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Te_nTe
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posted : Feb 19, 2004 19:46
the begin is good.anything to change.

1.till 4:20 there is no break , ppl suppose to dance and if you noticed the track is boring when you not making breaks.
2.Till 2:40 it is nice minimal progressive that realy got potential even for Iboga.But since then all messes up - you make goa.Dont know why??
and that melody in 6:16 is Astral Projection one.

Since you get out of the minimal borders your track became uninteresting and also low sound qulity.The melodies is higher at level.The groove not so changes(even if it changes you cant hear it because of mels).

Before you send it some where just rebuild the track try to stay more minimal dont make those astral proj. melodies and so on ...
make more breaks - you really need to sit up on your construction - think about that ppl will dance it.

good luck
Mindfly
Mindfly

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Posted : Feb 23, 2004 10:38
I'm totally hooked on this track! I wouldn't change a thing in the progression of the this track! The percussion is very addictive!

Prosect & Sound Session is just about to become my new favourite...           
You are beautiful, no matter what they say!
Mindfly
Mindfly

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Posted : Feb 25, 2004 21:18
Sorry... Sound Field of course.. not sound session...           
You are beautiful, no matter what they say!
kukan-dub-lagan/ItaiTaiko
kukan-dub-lagan/ItaiTaiko

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Posted : Feb 26, 2004 00:13
hi man..
if you like the track like that--stay with that:
you can use all the help here(and for sure it is importent),but look on it as a girlfriend--you know what you like
don't change it if you think that it's good-and if it is it will be sell...           Check out my music page - free music , new style and more :)
ND
ProSect

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Posted : Feb 26, 2004 12:34
Thanks for wonderfull feedback mindfly, i hope you will have Prosect and Sound Field in your favourites You keep it on your way too man!

kukan-dub-lagan dude, i totally agree, i love it as it is, other way i was not uploading and still digging it, anyway i wanna apply some cosmetics on it

thanks dudes.
love you all.
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