Another one in progress,tried to give it short of a descending tone from a full on sound to a deeper and darker state as it progresses,dunno if i managed to do that...Enjoy and comment if you please
minus
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Posted : Sep 24, 2010 02:24
nice work bru, starts off rippin , then simmers, but by the ending the energy is gone,u should maintain level of energy or atleast flux in and out but back in,the middle end part goes nice, work those percussions more there,ending lacks energy, maybe, build up the intro bass again in end?maybe
but nice work overall
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Posted : Oct 3, 2010 12:37
Thanks for the comment minus.Uploaded a new version,new basslines,leads,alot of atmos.Added alot of energy on that last part i think must sound much better now
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Posted : Oct 3, 2010 21:54
Sounds nice,mysterious and driving.
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Posted : Oct 4, 2010 09:44
you pretty much nailed it there bru, just fix the tit bits, like for example 1:00 min break comes out of flow, maybe add a drumm roll trrr with a delay on it just before break, but fuk the tit bits, real nice work.
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Posted : Oct 8, 2010 10:05
Could hear many good ideas and loops , The concept and the build are realy cool , There a story in . Good drive . For the sound Eq work need , Better mix , More machines and effects on the down area (Bass Kik) To bring them be more larg , Deep , Open and here . Try work more slow , You will see the difference .
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Posted : Oct 8, 2010 13:56
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On 2010-10-03 20:12, daark wrote:
cool track reminds ghreg on earth somehow things for improvement is snare and lp on bass (imho)
I'll take the part about Ghreg On Earth as a compliment as i really like the guy !:D
Looked into the snare a bit,gave it a more sharp and deep sound,must be better now.
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Posted : Oct 8, 2010 13:58
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On 2010-10-04 09:44, minus wrote:
you pretty much nailed it there bru, just fix the tit bits, like for example 1:00 min break comes out of flow, maybe add a drumm roll trrr with a delay on it just before break, but fuk the tit bits, real nice work.
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Posted : Oct 8, 2010 14:07
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On 2010-10-08 10:05, Cardinals Cartel wrote:
Could hear many good ideas and loops , The concept and the build are realy cool , There a story in . Good drive . For the sound Eq work need , Better mix , More machines and effects on the down area (Bass Kik) To bring them be more larg , Deep , Open and here . Try work more slow , You will see the difference .
I know it needs some EQ work,will do it later on.I will add alot of stuff,long way to finish it I have some slow tracks on the works,I just love the flow on 150-152 bpm http://soundcloud.com/epimetheus
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Posted : Oct 8, 2010 14:17
Uploaded another track,when finalized it will be the follow up for this.Check it out,you will like it if you liked this one
