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FREGLE - moving carcass
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fregle
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 13, 2005 18:12
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fregle
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Feb 21, 2005 21:14
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cmon guys, please give me just one comment... even if it's just to say that i suck, i'll be happy... but 21 views, of which 3 are my own is just not enough... I know i'm not the only one ignored like this, so i'd like to post this for everyone who doesn't get reply's or views... Iron madness and others are very experienced and need less comment, but they get the most comments... While us newbies don't get any feedback...
I promise that i personally will be listening more to other peoples tracks too... In the very near future... I just can't listen to audio at work, so i have to do it at home 
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Hayez
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Posted : Feb 22, 2005 21:37
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it sucks,  not.
overall isn't too bad, still it needs more work. the stereo image isn't balanced, you have the snare and a voice on the left and nothing to balance it on the right. snare is better on the middle. I would change the toms to something more electronic and spread them wider. percussion and bass still need to be more intresting.
keep posting.
 "a new art came into my mind which only you can create, the Art of Noises, the logical consequence of your marvelous innovations." Russolo, 1913 |
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Xamanist
Xamanist
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Posted : Feb 24, 2005 16:51
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hi!
can't talk about sound quality (bad speakers), so here's about construction and style:
sounds to me like old school goa, which i like a lot.. bass is indeed monotone, make some variations, it will keep the track fresh all along... track lacks also more distinct ambiences, i mean, more diferent elements in diferent times, it's a lot around the same lines and it gets a little boring IMO.. but this has potential if you get the story that brings the higher rise in the end
keep up friend,
Sérgio Xamanist
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Redlink
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Mar 2, 2005 22:11
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This sounds old school but i like it!
Nice psychedelic sounds in the middle but you should try to fix the bassline first because it sounds weird! Put some more movement and more soul into your work and the tracks will be much better!
Keep working, m8!
Have a good time all the time! |
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