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Freaks can fly - new track on myspace
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NtRider
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Posted : Dec 7, 2008 20:55:11
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NtRider
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Posted : Dec 11, 2008 16:16
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Come on guys i really need some feedback 
  Computer games do not affect kids. If Pacman affected us as kids, we'd all be running in darkened rooms, munching magic pills and listening to that repetitive, electronic music...
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PROGRESS
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Posted : Dec 11, 2008 22:22
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Hi,
Listening to your track now...
First, I think you need to pitch up the bass to match the rest of the track, also I can clearly hear presets being used (Vanguard I think).
Mess around with them a bit to make it sound more original. Oh, also try different Kick, this one sounds bit plastic, or may be this is just Myspace player.
Overall idea is good. I guess this is not a finished product yet, so keep working. Try to play with a melody a bit to make it less repetative.
And finally, this sounds like full-on time of track, so make that bass ROLL
Good luck with your project and don't mind my criticism
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NtRider
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Posted : Dec 19, 2008 14:02
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thanks for your opinion, im always welcome to critics bro  . I got to agree with you in some parts, but i think the kick sonority its because the myspace player. in rest i will take your opinion seriously and i will try to improve, later e i may post some new versions .
More feedback would be welcome guys
Cheers
Computer games do not affect kids. If Pacman affected us as kids, we'd all be running in darkened rooms, munching magic pills and listening to that repetitive, electronic music...
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