loki
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Posted : Nov 22, 2011 04:04:01
Hey Workshoppers of Isratrance. Been out of the internet lately - life is crazy and beautiful.
Also, Transmetropolitan is amazing, and has recently absorbed the past 3 days of my life. So the title of this song is inspired by Henry Miller via the vulgar diatribes of Warren Ellis; as well, a drunken night with my sister whom I don't really remember recording...
Looking for comments and critique, for some love and some hate, as always, for posting my tunes well outside of the borders of trance.
But - keep it psychedelic, friends.
Dance, even if you have nowhere to do it but your living room. ~Kurt Vonnegut
www.soundcloud.com/mixyott
vipal
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Posted : Nov 22, 2011 08:43
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Posted : Nov 22, 2011 09:56
Very nice intro.
Im rather a big fan of mystical vocals in tunes, so 5 stars for them Wobbling dub bass, hehehe, is not my side of the moon, but it sounds good.
The structure is good too, nothing gets to repetitive, always getting you through a different motion. Nice and chilled.
Good work mate.
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loki
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Posted : Nov 22, 2011 16:38
Thanks. I've been working a lot on the storytelling aspect of my composition, so I'm glad to see it pays off in not sounding repetetive.
More to come soon! More tunes with my sister on vox, too - you can find her stellar festival/psychedelic oriented leather, clothing, hats and accessories as Calypso Creations out of Montreal.
Dance, even if you have nowhere to do it but your living room. ~Kurt Vonnegut
www.soundcloud.com/mixyott
Equilizyme
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Posted : Nov 23, 2011 03:37
hey loki. cool sounding stuff man! I dont have the best speakers to listen to this on, but I think the tune might benefit from a bit of a longer kick in the middle where there is less going on.
I also think you could have a synth harmonizing with the bass line in the last section maybe like 2 or 3 octaves up, i think that would sound really cool cuz the bassline is really neat at that part! Or maybe bells, that might sound better. not sure.
