Dig the idea and overall vibe of the track, but sincerely it sounds like a sketch of the track, something you done quickly just to return to details later on and you never returned.
I hear less is more theory in your track which is good when you start out the basic idea and try to make interesting stuff with everything you have in disposal, but actually too much simplicity sometimes really gives the track empty feeling.
In your case little things would really give the track better atmosphere and I noticed you brakes and introductions really don't have any impact whatsoever, it's like you know what goes where and that's it and you build it no looking back, introduction to brake and brakes and even parts of the track are really missing that, I can draw your track in my head when I'm listening, and I really love to forget the whole thing and enjoy the music, when that thing happens I know it's good track, that atmosphere is so good and suitable that you forget everything about production and enjoy the ride.
My point is obviously to step out from your artist stage and listen to your track like it's not yours, be realistic, close your eyes and if you still enjoy the ride like in the track your favorite artist made, you know there is something, what is missing in your listeners head is that thing that is really missing and you can't move on, there are people who just enjoy every little thing they hear, they don't worry about how you EQ-ed the bass and which synth that may be, they want the sound,atmosphere, ride
It's really good to dive in your track more, to try to make things even better, too put tiny details you missed because you now have the big picture, flow with your track, write a story about all sounds, give them life, give your listeners more things to listen when they ride with you, if they start to follow each sound, they will fall in trance and that's all about, give them free ride to unknown place, let them follow your sounds to the final destination, make masterpiece even if no one will notice in first few listening, but believe, the best tracks have so much hidden gems and there is so much stuff you discover listening, that's why you listen over and over again
fraxi
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Posted : Sep 30, 2012 11:05
Thanks for the feedback You're right, I finished it quickly. I ran out of patience and creativity, which is my biggest problem.
On the next track I will not be so hurried, actually try to do it as you describe - checking as it's not me but the future listener. You're right - the devil is in the details and I failed.
Your words gave me a lot to think about, the next productions I will put more heart and a lot less of pressure
Good, I'm glad that didn't sounded cruel and mean, only wanted to give you some insights from the same point of view and don't go in the red zone of trashing and all that
