hierophant3
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Posted : Dec 23, 2013 20:14:10
Hello again everyone,
Just made a new track; sharing it with you all in hope of a few listens and feedback. Its a 138 bpm experimental prog psy track; hope you all like it.
regards and namaste!
hierophant3
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Posted : Dec 23, 2013 20:15
somehow the soundcloud player interface isn't showing up; though i typed https .......sorry about that!
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Posted : Dec 23, 2013 20:57
here i put link to ur track up:
hey man ,pretty nice, nice concepts n layout is decent,, jus need to fix few things like mm,, the intro is too low,, up it,, also voice sample r too low, in break etc, pump em upper,,also fix small mixin issues like 2:30'ish the drums is fukin up the headroom space,,otherwise nice!! keep up wrrrk,kaboom
hierophant3
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Posted : Dec 24, 2013 10:54
hey man ,pretty nice, nice concepts n layout is decent,, jus need to fix few things like mm,, the intro is too low,, up it,, also voice sample r too low, in break etc, pump em upper,,also fix small mixin issues like 2:30'ish the drums is fukin up the headroom space,,otherwise nice!! keep up wrrrk,kaboom
Wow! thanks; how did you fix it? And thank you so much for listening and the feedback; merry christmas to you and all!
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Posted : Dec 24, 2013 14:18
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On 2013-12-24 10:54, hierophant3 wrote:
Wow! thanks; how did you fix it?
Simple! Just use http instead of https Http soundcloud links are translăted into the audio player, https links aren't detected
Regarding the tune, It seems shallow with nothing going on because the beat is way above every other sound -> the beat is supposed to be in the front, but everything else is too much behind.
The result is a very calm tune and a 6 minute beat, that IMHO would drive me off the dance floor. Progressive trance is really needed after a whole night of dark and a morning of full on, the body and mind is exhausted, has been ripped apart by the dark tunes and the seeds have been planted by the full on, so it's would be time for the progressive to shine and water the seeds make them grow and settle in so we can start of another week.
But in your tune it seems nothing happens, it's just a beat going on. OK in progressive usually a tune takes some time to go somewhere, and id doesn't take too many curves or detours, but usually it progresses over time -> try skipping your tune from 1 minute to 3 to 5 and it sounds like the same loop going on.
So, I would make more happen, and have somewhat bigger texture and soundscape changes.
This can actually be achieved in the mix with your tune as it seems you already have some nice sounds going on, but you need to bring them out as the beat overwhelms and overpowers the whole tune.
hierophant3
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Posted : Dec 24, 2013 22:55
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On 2013-12-24 14:18, knocz wrote:
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On 2013-12-24 10:54, hierophant3 wrote:
Wow! thanks; how did you fix it?
Simple! Just use http instead of https Http soundcloud links are translăted into the audio player, https links aren't detected
Regarding the tune, It seems shallow with nothing going on because the beat is way above every other sound -> the beat is supposed to be in the front, but everything else is too much behind.
The result is a very calm tune and a 6 minute beat, that IMHO would drive me off the dance floor. Progressive trance is really needed after a whole night of dark and a morning of full on, the body and mind is exhausted, has been ripped apart by the dark tunes and the seeds have been planted by the full on, so it's would be time for the progressive to shine and water the seeds make them grow and settle in so we can start of another week.
But in your tune it seems nothing happens, it's just a beat going on. OK in progressive usually a tune takes some time to go somewhere, and id doesn't take too many curves or detours, but usually it progresses over time -> try skipping your tune from 1 minute to 3 to 5 and it sounds like the same loop going on.
So, I would make more happen, and have somewhat bigger texture and soundscape changes.
This can actually be achieved in the mix with your tune as it seems you already have some nice sounds going on, but you need to bring them out as the beat overwhelms and overpowers the whole tune.
Hi! thanks a ton for listening and the feedback...didn't realise the track name had such significance i'm just a fan of Gregg Braden and others like him.. I'm sorry you don't like the track. Just trying, you know...to make 'that' track. This is what occurred at the moment and, here it is...one more try (in spite of the obstacles ) ....regarding the mix, i don't have really good referencing at the moment; so an imbalanced mix is a really good possibility ! Thanks a lot for the honest feedback...
merry christmas.
Http soundcloud links are translăted into the audio player, https links aren't detected 
i'm just a fan of Gregg Braden and others like him.. I'm sorry you don't like the track. Just trying, you know...to make 'that' track. This is what occurred at the moment and, here it is...one more try (in spite of the obstacles