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Fractal Helix - The Unborn Identity. new track
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Fractal Helix
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Posted : May 6, 2013 00:24:50
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moleqlarsuperstructure
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Posted : May 6, 2013 22:03
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liek your ideas. nice melodys and good vibe. your problems in my opinion is the Percussion. heard the snare not really. or is there even one?
try fitting all your percussions just by equing gives a lot of precision by doing well maybe some litl bit compression as well gives nice transients in the mix.
bout the bass i cant give really advice. i think it has not enouth subs nowadays. but im just stucking in my own subbass labyrinth |
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iCon
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Posted : May 6, 2013 22:19
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Grevinsky
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Posted : May 6, 2013 22:27
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Hey man.
I start with mixing feedback.
You could work more with the kick and base, the base is not very prominent right now.
The different elements clash into each other freq wise.
Listen to example 4.20, and then compare with 5.20. MAaan hear the comeback of the base there.
Your lead take some serious place in your mix and eat up your base .
I miss the snare, if its there i cant really hear it .
You have do some wierd panning on the lead and some other sounds too.
Some more change in the lead would be nice, aswell as in the percussions. Now you loose me a bit in the end cause it get little repetitive.
If you work little more with it i think you can make it really nice!.
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Fractal Helix
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Posted : May 6, 2013 22:46
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cheers guys, appreciate the feedback
I always seem have this problem with the leads clouding the mix and getting in the way of the bass, I don't like low-cutting them too much as they seem to get well thin but maybe I need to just bite the bullet and do it!
there is a snare but i think it needs replacing cos it sounds rubbish so I might have buried it in the mix a bit, also I like having them quite quiet anyway cos they can take away from the driving rhythm.
will work on it more.
cheers! x |
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Filthy Dragon
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Posted : May 7, 2013 00:45
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Very nice tune
You can make this even better with effortless work, i think you need better balance of kick and bass, give little bulk to the bass and the snare because the kick is too bulky,
the sounds are like struggling to be heard at some parts of the tune, maybe it's because you over compressing, let it loose a little bit and it will be great.
Good creations.
Cheers! |
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