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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Apr 11, 2011 01:08:35
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 11, 2011 07:08
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intro sounds are nice... nice atmos there.... bass man, is missing a lot of the low freqs which makes it bass... break at 2.25 deserves a more conscious direction... i like 3.10 on.. bass 6.04 on i like too..
peace
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Posted : Apr 11, 2011 12:03
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The truth .. Could't smell any flower in your track .
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On 2011-04-11 01:08:35, kabbalisticvillage wrote:
Comment and Critque .. mostly on the bass
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What bass .. ?
The only place he is appear is at 07:10 to 07:19 .
Intro - If you make an 01:41 min' intro try make it interesting , Less talking pad (Especially if its not yours) ,
All this track is based on this talking pad so this is not a way to build somthing serious .
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On 2011-04-05 19:49, kabbalisticvillage wrote:
a cool sample usually does the trick
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On 2011-04-05 20:44, NychroLogic wrote:
you can't be serious
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So you got the answer already there but i can see you didt do anything about or internalize that .
Also hh loops (Or may i say hh loop - Why the same one all over the track ?) Also gain it down its screaming to hell .
You have to fill it up by now all sound very boring man .
Try be more open mind , Seems you an emotional person when thats good but try bring more technique into
your tunes , Less monotonic and more stream and rhythm in .
More Fx's , More leads , More mellos and atmos and most import of all right mix in .
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Apr 11, 2011 14:40
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panike
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Posted : Apr 11, 2011 14:46
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Apr 11, 2011 14:56
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psypersia
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Posted : Apr 11, 2011 15:04
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also you can creat another bass channel
lower the note...Eq.. mono.. some reverb and sidechain |
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Apr 11, 2011 20:13
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Plasmorh
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Posted : Apr 12, 2011 14:47
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bit gay :x
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psyraal
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Posted : Apr 12, 2011 16:30
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Apr 12, 2011 16:37
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orgytime
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Posted : Apr 12, 2011 17:37
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i think youre getting better!
the bass is the first thing i noticed negatively... maybe make it less dominant.
also the part @4:25 ... i think there are clashing freqencies (use eq etc...)
cheers
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Apr 12, 2011 18:04
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jeeboomba
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Posted : Apr 12, 2011 18:17
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On 2011-04-12 14:47, Plasmorh wrote:
bit gay :x
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hehehe
on topic.. i see the sounds getting better,, the bass is good on these headphone... the break at 2.25 is not going good with me at all.. the sounds after this break are way too harsh... is not what i'd like in the middle of a weird trip... i like from 3.34 the kik bass,, for a while... but def you are getting better..
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why you soooo in hurry bro?
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Apr 12, 2011 18:42
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