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first upload full track
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RAZ
RAZ
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Posted : May 4, 2006 01:59
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AzatiS
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Posted : May 4, 2006 06:39
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I kinda like it man nice..Cant say that u cant do better but is ok..Pretty interesting until 3:00 made me want to hear more..(Basically intro was kinda too simple)
To be honest i was w8ing for a "main theme" of the track u know the big boom that never came but is ok !
Nice try overall kinda like it
ps.U cant continue the 5:00-5:37 melody with some "weirdo" lead and here goes the main boom (thats my opinion doesnt mean u have to do it )  cheers !! |
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RAZ
RAZ
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Posted : May 4, 2006 06:54
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first thx for the comment i enjoyed reading it
now for the there is no boom complaint u r quite right...the main idea of the track is to be groovy and floating..hope u get my drift (:
now i cant say u r not right about it ..to be honest with u i think a boom is needed. well maybe in the future ill do it,,,(:
thx a lot for your comment again... |
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Tellurium
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Posted : May 4, 2006 08:51
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I like it, it's well diversified, i like especially the melody at about 4:30 and the end.
I Agree for the big boom but all in all very good track !! |
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Karma Konnect
Karma Konnect
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Posted : May 4, 2006 11:37
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ernestgrin
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Posted : May 4, 2006 16:06
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some of the elements remind me of commodor computer music. Tetris sort of...
You've got the groove, the bass is good, but the kick need some more wetness... i think. But it misses the karachana part that every good track must have. Just try listening to forms of some good tracks that you liked and figure the rythm building system.
And the piano part (5:00...) does not fit in my view, do you've made a great shift to the beat...
hope you'll respect sincire opinion |
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RAZ
RAZ
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Posted : May 4, 2006 18:51
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afcorse i do man...thx for the comments again and i know it misses the "karahana" part i made it with out any karahana just groove...like i said in thw future maybe ill change it and add a karahana part...(:
thx again all |
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