knocz
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Posted : Mar 21, 2014 21:27
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mm the intro does seem in the same key as the tune.. and it collides a bit -> try using some of the sounds in both parts and play it in tune
0:57 and 1:02, for example, that effect is way in front of everything else, you'll need some more attention in the mix.
In this section, all of the crashes are slightly ahead of the down beat, is that intended?
1:24 Yeah yeah man! It seems like some of your kicks and bass notes are at a higher volume than the rest, why's that? It should all have the same power
Towards the end, it starts repeating it self, it may be a good choice if you want to mix out of this into another tune, but solo it seems you ran out of something.
Nevertheless, make more and more! Use that gear, learn it in and out, exploit if in your own way, and press rec
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