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Posted : Oct 3, 2011 13:40:27
OverdoZe - Diving in the sky
what do you think of my first song MADE IN FL STUDIO???
Cardinals Cartel
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Posted : Oct 10, 2011 12:02
Realy good sounds (here and there) beside horrible !
Can hear your will , Your vision , Your passion - I understand . For first track is great ! . (Can remember myself .. I had an real hardcore music when i start .. This is all because at this time you have alot to 'Tell' but your 'Means' is out of blue and you are limited , And its can happen .. No prob .. The way is long ..)
The point is i cant find real drive in (somthing who take me in .. So i can feel part of) , No real Hh loops work (Where them .. ? barely can hear) Or somthing who keep me 'A weak' , (Many empty places) , Tell you the truth .. The only thing i want to do now its to pressed 'Stop' And not listen to it anymore (This is not to harm you m8 , Not at all) I say so to 'Let you see' How all sound and heard from an outside opinion (Myn) , When sure i can see what go's in better then you cause i dont involved (Emotional) with .
I think you should try work on your order , Eq sound , Mix it better , Better bass (Almost cant hear) Add more soft sound , You hiting 'Hard' all over but 'In the end of the day' , In fact .. Nothing real happen , No mello's atmos pads , No real stream or interesting movement .. Just headache .. Not more , Sure not 'Diving' or 'Sky' or those (Imo) Where them .. ? , 1 sample who say ' 'Diving in sky' ? Try dont base on it , You have to bring harmony into your music .
The only thing i like in here is 02:08 to 02:27 This 'Talking pad' can be nice there for the break but you just kiil it by puting it every where in , What the point ? I dont know .. Just think that after 3-4-5-6-7 times in you 'Lose' it (If you know what i mean) Not interesting or nice/Cool anymore but just boring (Must be proportion , Some ratio , cant be unique that way) .
Think of the points i have wrote , You can take them (Or not) But dont be angry about me ok ? Im not one of those who write you 'Killer' and so , Not at all .. I will always say what i realy think and im not afraid here from anyone .. This is my truth , So take all on the good side .. Will help you in your next projects and your musical future 'Road' for sure .
Try be more in focus when work , And built up your story that way so normal peoples can hear it too .
Keep it up ..
OpTiKoOl
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Posted : Oct 10, 2011 15:52
ok.
for first track i don't find it bad, in fact if this is your first track...you got yourself a nice selections of sound timbre/patch/sample wise, what ever they are.
i believe your want your sound so loud, that your putting all your sound upfront, and i'm lost in the sounds.. everysound want attention at the same time. i'm lost. and it sound harsh.
with this i can tell you that your volume balance is not good to my ears.
try to lower all volume faders to -(minus) infinite.. and start bringing them up (start with kick, until minus 10 / minus 8 db)...
now the kick will work for your other sound as a reference point. you want your kick louder, but not too much.
pass to other sounds, when you feel that they need more 2 or 3 db, stop there.. go to the next sound.. until u've got all sound playing.
and now, start to use equalizers, that 2 or 3 db that some sound lack, you'll give them with EQ. not boosting EQ output. but cuting and boosting the sound that are working in the same frequency.
the objective is to make them 'clear' without going any further in volume... pan them, cut here, gently boost there, etc..
for fisrt track is not bad, it's good... i didn't make this kind of track at first try out.
