Nabla jpr
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Posted : Jan 7, 2011 14:20:04
Hey guys,
please have a listen to my trak and please be bad
there are many things to change but I don't know where to start ..so here it is
thanks
Plasmorh
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Posted : Jan 7, 2011 21:31
4.12- pxiiiim!!!! xD
nice morning
but u should try to make things a bit more interesting
but nice work
I want a spare brain.... or 2.
Nabla jpr
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Posted : Jan 10, 2011 12:32
hey Plasmorh,
thanks for the feedback..
this is the third version a bit better but still needs working
thankss
Vaultex
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Posted : Jan 12, 2011 12:40
Hi there Nabla, this is just an opinion:
- the bass pattern is repetitive,almost the same in the whole track.
- the crashes could last a bit longer and are also a bit repetitive, could put a little bit of reverb and use some filters opening and closing to make the breaks.
- the track consists more of just kick, bass, some Fx and some separate notes, could use more complex synth riffs
- it gets better from. 6:00 with the introduction of the synth riff, which also becomes a little repetitive
- in general it sounds good, but it has a lot of room for improvement with more sounds and sequences being added it can become really more insteresting.
Thanks
Nabla jpr
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Posted : Jan 12, 2011 14:05
thanks Vaultex, you don't know how much I appreciate your feedback
I agree on everything you said, I knew it needs what you said but I also need a way to finish tracks and get initial feedback from people..and this is the first step..
about repetition on synth and stuff, it's a kind of decision...I mean I would like to make psy evolving music without too much changes...I know it's difficult because the line between borness and trance is very little
..so here it is
