COMET SHELL
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Posted : Mar 23, 2012 23:48:11
here is a demo of a track im working on. been really busy this week driveing miles and miles with no sleep, but its all been worth it because im now the farther of an amazing baby boy, so while my girlfriend is resting in hosp iv started this new project, please let me know what you think people. cheers
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Posted : Mar 23, 2012 23:55
yeah man, got a nice vibe to it. just need the odd faders pullin down, dont like the hats, the bassline sounds syncd to me, did u use two ocs or have layerd?, o.11 intro needs eq, to much in the high freq on that whoosh, hurts ears and noticed u faded the bass n kick in with volume... how about with a filter aswell to match the other freqencies and bring it in like that, then sum qlitchy panning to break the track in.
above all keep the spirit of this track. well done on ya bab!!
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Mar 24, 2012 00:04
hey thanks for the feedback, and thanks for listening, il take your advice, the hi hats are probably not the ones im going to use, i sometimes just put in some to give me some ideas. and the whoosh needs work. the bass has choruse effect on it, i love that sound, i just need to get everything clearer. im strugaling to stay awake at the mo so i will leave it for now, my girlfriend was in labor for 20 hours so we are both so tierd. thanks again for listening
jizy
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Posted : Mar 24, 2012 00:12
at 1.20 the hats seem freq clashy, but could be just soundcloud. finish it tho, as will be a reminder track of when ya bab arrived , call it Deliverance lol .... be true to ya ears
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Posted : Mar 24, 2012 09:39
ha ha i might just call it that. if i do finish it it will be the first iv ever finished, this year i would like to get and ep or album made. i lost all my synths, samples, and projects 2 weeks ago so iv started from fresh. and thanks for the good luck
iv also had a listen with fresh (ish) ears and i can hear that it needs alot of work
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Posted : Mar 24, 2012 16:00
congrats!
this track does sound promising, looking forward to seeing how it develops.
there's a bit of a click in the kick drum, most noticable at like 1.22 where the kick stops for a bit...not liking that. perhaps some eq could sort this out? did you use two kicks? (sounds like it)
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Mar 24, 2012 21:06
hi insomniscene, thanks for listening. i havnt really noticed the click in the kick drum, prehaps il have a closer listen on my monitors tomorrow ( i mostly work in headphones ) it is only 1 kickdrum i never use 2. some wierd sounds are probably due to me useing the izotope 5 demo for the first time on it an not having it set up right. cheers
Sound Surgeon
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Posted : Mar 24, 2012 23:46
It is kinda hard giving an opinion on such a short loop.
All I can say it sounds promising, waiting to hear a longer loop or the full track
Good luck,
Misha
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Posted : Mar 25, 2012 00:19
i will post the full track when i get around to finishing it. thanks for listening.
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Mar 27, 2012 22:52
heres an updated version, i still cant get thye hi hats right, im having trouble makeing music this month for some reason.
jizy
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Posted : Mar 28, 2012 00:27
maybe nout wrong with hats, but maybe to much in the KHZ at same time
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Posted : Mar 28, 2012 09:24
Hi! nice track! the bass+kick is very fat and nice!! i like it! spotted some sytrys preset which i used years ago in some track
COMET SHELL
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Posted : Mar 28, 2012 10:12
thanks dronetic, you did indeed spot some sytrys preset, i dont use it much as i find it abit tricky to use, but on the odd track i will use some of its presets.
