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Posted : Mar 13, 2014 05:12:39
hey peeps what do you guys think about my firt FULLY track?
I've been learning music production for about 10 months, never finished a track, always learning/testing parts, leads, etc... so i really need much advices
Thank you!
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Posted : Mar 13, 2014 06:44
keep going
u deflationary milked the ptch mod there
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Posted : Mar 13, 2014 07:35
Yes keep it up, you've got a good flow through the track, not my style of choice but definetely a killer track! Congratulations!
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Posted : Mar 13, 2014 10:52
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Posted : Mar 14, 2014 05:25
thank u guys ill start another one with a better arrangement, but i'd really appreciate some tips!
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Posted : Mar 14, 2014 21:37
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On 2014-03-13 05:12:39, PinoXio wrote:
hey peeps what do you guys think about my firt FULLY track?
First? make more! This sounds good
I think there's nothing anyone can teach you more than you making more tunes! Experience is knowledge Just keep on doing the way your doing it, your on a good path.
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On 2014-03-14 05:25, PinoXio wrote:
ill start another one with a better arrangement, but i'd really appreciate some tips!
That's the spirit!
For some tips:
- you could put in a little more space between the bass notes
- your kick + bass will have a bigger impact if you render it to audio and guaranty there is no overlapping sounds between your kick and every single bass note, no clips, and that little bit of space for some air in it
- you could play with contrast of your sound design, you have a lot of aggressive sounds, you could some some cleaner sounds (but could keep the vibe.. a sine wave with a little pitch vibrato sounds clean and spooky)
- this style of trance and leads is very overdone in Portugal, and I really think people could innovate if they put in some melodic progressions in the chorus - but that way be too much and escape the genre
- some of the squelch aggressive leads could have a counter part - I like to make the same lead with 2 different synths, divide the lead MIDI (or orchestration) into two parts (vertically or horizontally) have one play part A and another part B - just to give more to the sonic pallet - or duplicate the synth and do a slight variation, like using a negative amount in your pitch mod envelope so it goes up instead of down
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Posted : Mar 16, 2014 23:17
aww, thanks my friend, again ur here helping me!
thanks alot!
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Posted : Mar 17, 2014 11:50
Ta muito high-tek para mim Anyway maybe do like D-Maniac, he uses some more melodic counterpoints to the hightek stuff, kinda 2 styles in one Tudo que é melhor e mais superior em mim saúda tudo que é melhor e mais alto em si
what do you guys think about my firt FULLY track?
Just keep on doing the way your doing it, your on a good path.
