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first trac need review
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insane
Silent Horror
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Posted : Oct 26, 2003 23:00
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this is my first trac....pls let me know where i lack in and where i am in excess,,,
pls let me know wetehr im goin in the right direction and pls guide me if im not,,,
criticism is welcome,,,will be for my betterment,.,
thank u.
http://www.geocities.com/jigardgreat/mp3/darknessfall.mp3 |
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sentient
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 27, 2003 10:15
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The link didn't work for me.
-B |
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insane
Silent Horror
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Posted : Oct 27, 2003 12:21
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just do ,save taget as...
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ikakook
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 28, 2003 07:56
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Link worked fine - nice bassline... but the haunting trumpet/cello needs some work...
The bassline get boring after the first twentyfour cycles. See if you can use some soundscape-visions kind of sound, build it up and break into a higher, more thumping bassline.
Nice work insane...  Keep it up... you're not too far away from realizing your dreamz... |
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insane
Silent Horror
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Posted : Oct 28, 2003 16:13
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thankx alot ikakook,,,
i shall work on the part u said....>
thankx for all the support,,,dude,ur the best;) |
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Te_nTe
IsraTrance Junior Member
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Posted : Oct 28, 2003 18:24
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at all nice full on track
your percussion level is awful - makes a sense that this dont fit the track(sound)
nice pads - really good work
keep up
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insane
Silent Horror
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Posted : Oct 29, 2003 00:27
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hi there Te_nTe
>im sorry i couldnt understand wat u said,,,i mean,,u say that without the percusion the trac will be btetter,or is is the volume level of the souns which is the problem,,
im puttin up another trac of mine soon,
considering the offsets of this trac...
pls reply soon,
and thankx for all ur support,,,
big booom! |
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fasspot
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Posted : Nov 2, 2003 20:12
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Good work insane, but i think that you have to take care with mastering...
I can help you for this, contact me at: fasspot@hotmail.com |
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shroomz
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Posted : Nov 3, 2003 17:43
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hey good goin` ,,, a lil` help from fellows out here and blasterssss !!0!
 'Let's meet on the Otherworld - let's speak about the unspeakable' |
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