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First song some input needed

scarphish

Started Topics : 2
Posts : 3
Posted : May 15, 2012 07:18:21

Hey guys this is my first song i feel like my greatest weakness is the music part itself i have little to no knowledge about music so making transitions between melody's is difficult for me anyway let me know what you think of the mix itself.

<object height="81" width="100%"> <param name="movie" value="https://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F46416747"></param> <param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param> <embed allowscriptaccess="always" height="81" src="https://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fapi.soundcloud.com%2Ftracks%2F46416747" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"></embed> </object> <span><a href="http://soundcloud.com/scarphish/angry-toaster">Angry Toaster</a> by <a href="http://soundcloud.com/scarphish">Scarphish</a></span>

Edit* i cant figure out how to embed the player

Equilizyme
IsraTrance Junior Member

Started Topics : 19
Posts : 593
Posted : May 15, 2012 21:40

hey man, i dont think your transitions between melodies are bad, but i do think your melodies need to be wetter, esp. the one at 1.21. also is that lead at .54 high passed? if this is your first track mate you are in good shape, i wish my first track sounded like this in the low end

keep it up!

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