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JeSuS
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Posted : Jun 24, 2005 13:44
Hi all!
here 3 of my first tracks i have been made
for last 2 years
Need your opinion about everything what you think about my music....
I can't to finish no one of this
And want to ask : HOW TO DO THIS? !!!
Need your opinion....
http://195.151.228.66/atmospheric.mp3 - my first chillout
http://195.151.228.66/love.mp3 - melody in my mind
http://195.151.228.66/Fullon.mp3 - dark &twisted
JeSuS
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posts :  115
Posted : Jun 27, 2005 09:03
no comments?
JeSuS
IsraTrance Junior Member

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Posts :  115
Posted : Jun 30, 2005 09:35
i think i need improve my style
Hayez


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Posted : Jul 1, 2005 00:37
yes you do. you won't get a lot of responses for half done tracks. make original sounds and work more.
BTW, the fullon track starts good, maybe focus on that.           "a new art came into my mind which only you can create, the Art of Noises, the logical consequence of your marvelous innovations." Russolo, 1913
EYB
Noized

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Posted : Jul 1, 2005 14:40
JeSuS i just listened the dark full on track. Yes u must improve ur production and style. The intro is very good already, nice idea. Then ur bass and kick is 'ok' but bass needs a bit more work. Then ur track needs more atmosphere, some fx with reverb. The first leads are a bit to loud, and the noise lead gets abit boring, so if u finish this track introduce a new one after this first two minutes.

I am sure u can make something big out of this beginning. Work and learn

Peace and greetz            Signature
JeSuS
IsraTrance Junior Member

Started Topics :  23
Posts :  115
Posted : Jul 8, 2005 14:34
Thnx!!!
I just wonna to get the best of all of this track and make one 11 min track
i will!!!



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