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First Progressive 130bpm :)
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iCon
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Posted : Apr 3, 2013 18:34:41
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klippel
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Posted : Apr 3, 2013 19:18
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well its pretty solid as is. i would have liked a melodic element, be it a pad, an arpeggio or simple melodic call and answer thingy to evolve a bit more of a story throuoghout of the different parts. to grow a connection. you have a solid base, now opt for the extra topping to make the track stand out!
and keep groving the low temp prog, seems to fit you.
  http://www.ektoplazm.com/free-music/stereofeld-frequenzwechsel
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iCon
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Posted : Apr 3, 2013 20:34
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COMET SHELL
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Posted : Apr 3, 2013 21:19
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nice track, i cant really listen through moniters so i cant coment on your mix, but it sounds like its going to be a great track when its finished.
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SomeGuyPsy
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Posted : Apr 4, 2013 03:08
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I like it! As said before, I miss some extra "toopngs" some tasty melodic elements, to spice it up. I like your ideas, and the flow. It just dont sound finished.. yet  |
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aje
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Posted : Apr 4, 2013 13:05
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iCon
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Posted : Apr 4, 2013 22:59
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untilthereislight
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Posted : Apr 5, 2013 12:55
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Very nice ideas and vibes dude. Like your style.
Along with things mentioned above. A few things I think can make the track better.
Im hearing a little too much lows in the kick and bass. Maybe you need to hipass around 35hz just to clean up some muddyness.
Percussions can be louder. Also I think you could use a better clap.
Really nice melodies after 2:30 point. A little more fx over there can go a long way.
Superb filtering in the break. Can maybe bring back those nice melodies you had going earlier with some melodies.
Overall awesome stuff dude.
Cheers!
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iCon
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Posted : Apr 5, 2013 20:58
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