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w0lfis
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Posted : Oct 10, 2009 20:57:53
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http://wolfis.mine.nu/temp/flejd3.mp3
First draft of anything i ever started making. Does it have any potencial att all or should i go back to playing computer games? 
Bash away! =)
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Taii
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Posted : Oct 11, 2009 12:01
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hi, if this is really your first attempt, wow 
next time you could try add some begining, calm parts, you know, some structure or something, i dont know how is that called:)) and bass could be stronger imho
it sure does have some potencial, so dont give up ;p |
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Freeflow
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Posted : Oct 11, 2009 16:58
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I think you have been doing music for some time at least  but like you say this is your first draft!
its has a lot of potential!(most things do, if you work enough) you should continue creating and keep this line... add more whacky sounds and twisted stuff.. later on in the track you could introduce some deep atmosphere... or some trippy happy melody, or why not one section of each... contrast is always nice.. it sort of have both seriousness and a comic side this one...
play around, also a cool thing is to automate a reverb dive(as i call them) when you gradually increase the wetness of the reverb...
Good luck! and Dont sit around playing too much video game!! Work work work.. hehe
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w0lfis
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Posted : Oct 13, 2009 22:13
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Taii
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Posted : Oct 13, 2009 23:27
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I like it, a lot.) just dont be afraid to change percs from time to time and the bass could be a little bit stronger, but thats a matter of my personal taste or something:D
I just cant believe this is one of your first attempts to make music:) |
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w0lfis
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Posted : Oct 14, 2009 02:24
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well it's the first time i try making music on my own. i have a lot of friends here in sweden who make psychedelic music and i tend to sit alot with them in theire studios so iv'e picked up bits and pieces from here and there
with stronger bass do you mean more volume or more "oomph"? =)
Regards Joakim |
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Taii
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Posted : Oct 14, 2009 15:43
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Oh, that explains it, i guess..
About the bass, i dont know, i would try a bit more volume, but im not sure.. Sometimes it sounds ok.. Maybe just forget it
Looking forward for your next one:) good luck |
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Posted : Oct 14, 2009 19:59
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Perma Fry
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Posted : Oct 14, 2009 23:01
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This is really killer for a first attempt.
take a break from video games
You do both and you ll break your hand !
G'luck in the future
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Shamzi
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Posted : Oct 15, 2009 12:20
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Vilka är din psykedeliska vänner?
bra låt, jag gillar inte dark så mycket med det låter helt ok...
om du just börjat är det ännu bättre!
hälsningar från växjö!
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w0lfis
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Posted : Oct 15, 2009 14:48
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Now it's starting to get finnished in my eyes atleast
http://wolfis.mine.nu/temp/One%20Wish-ver3.mp3
Flejden - One Wish [7:15] still needs fixing at the end and modify the basline sum.
glad to hear sum criticism also
And Shamzi i hang around with Troglodytes, Pushers and Taigan Sunset almost every weekend but know alot more artist around here in Sweden.
Regards
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Taii
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Posted : Oct 15, 2009 17:30
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great:) i like it very much.. only thing ive noticed is that the first part isnt changing much, but i liked it so i think its not a big problem:)
more! |
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Freeflow
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Posted : Oct 15, 2009 22:36
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On 2009-10-15 12:20, Shamzi wrote:
Vilka är din psykedeliska vänner?
bra låt, jag gillar inte dark så mycket med det låter helt ok...
om du just börjat är det ännu bättre!
hälsningar från växjö!
S
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I think its nice if everybody speaks english here in this international forum...
cheers
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Freeflow
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Posted : Oct 15, 2009 22:37
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On 2009-10-15 14:48, w0lfis wrote:
Now it's starting to get finnished in my eyes atleast
http://wolfis.mine.nu/temp/One%20Wish-ver3.mp3
Flejden - One Wish [7:15] still needs fixing at the end and modify the basline sum.
glad to hear sum criticism also
And Shamzi i hang around with Troglodytes, Pushers and Taigan Sunset almost every weekend but know alot more artist around here in Sweden.
Regards
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hey man you are getting somewhere....
im listening right now.. will give some feedback when im done listening
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Freeflow
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Posted : Oct 15, 2009 22:47
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Hi again! i think you should give the structure a better view! as of now its kind of going nowhere...
by using only fragments of the "melody" you can come up with a variety of different motifs and for the "climax" you can gather all this motifs to one unity..
so i think with the melodic content you have you should make some motifs with them and introduce a little earlier, a nice thing is to add delay to a motif so its kind of endless and you can use it again and again to cause tension for the next transition to a more revealing motif... and man like i told you, you should at least get one atmosphere to the begining of the track as in the middle of the beginning its missing something
Good luck!
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