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First fullon track from upcoming demo album..
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Bosque Sub Zinho
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Posted : Oct 6, 2010 14:48:03
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Syncronik
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Posted : Oct 6, 2010 20:30
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same thing...
i'll write as i listen...
epic intro! nice background sounds
nice starting beat, up & down
that break at 1:18 was awesome 
3:21 everything Ok!
nice down beat!
4:35 damnnn man awesome break!! i really like those
how did you do it? i'm really impressed
everything ok untill the end....
for me, this is better than the other track, i really really like that crazy breaks you do
nice style, very good track
keep it that way man! 
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Obelizk
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Posted : Oct 6, 2010 21:27
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groovy as fuck. Psychooooooooo
It's pretty dark but keeps up the momentum, and the bassline pitches are discernible.
DIG. liking the breaks too.
Only suggestion I could make is check some of the glitchingness around the beginning just to make it's quantized on right.
good work brotha
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Bosque Sub Zinho
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Posted : Oct 6, 2010 23:30
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@Syncronik tnx again.. ) and u asked how i made that brake..?! just use the 'dblue Glitch' VST and put your imagination flow..!! )
@Ameoba tnank ya bro.. i'm glad u liked it.. )
yeah, i checked the intro on my headphones and heard the glitchy sound dominates on left speaker.. tnx for that advice, u know i made music on speakers and the left speaker is closer to me then the right, so is my weard room schedule xD, and sometimes i skip some failures.. ;DD |
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kabbalisticvillage
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Posted : Oct 7, 2010 13:26
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wizanda
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Posted : Oct 7, 2010 15:49
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The melody takes over the mix allot and by lowering it's volume to add more space, might lift the bounce more as it will still hold center (as it contains lots of high frequencies) without then taking over. 
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Bosque Sub Zinho
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Posted : Oct 7, 2010 21:46
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@kabbalisticvillage
tnx bro.. i put the glitch on separetad channels but sometimes also i use effects for all the tape, when making breaks with the kick and the leads.. i use also the fruity loops gross beat and effectrix VST.. for me enough for that break, glich i want.. hope it helps.. )
@wizanda
yeah i know sometimes the melody takes the track, but the melody takes me and then i'm like high..!! ;DD but i need also the fucking Yamaha monitors, when i will have those, it will be much easier 2 produce then my Genius 5.1... xDD ;DD and new soundcard, my card is on limit..!! ://
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Plasmorh
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Posted : Oct 8, 2010 00:34
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i like it, its the full on type i most enjoy....
only 1 tiny thing...
"my names is optimus prime" allready used 8)
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Bosque Sub Zinho
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Posted : Oct 8, 2010 02:10
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@Plasmorph
tnx bro.. and..
i tought about that part bro.. but this wave was the main influence for me to make this track, i like the short powerfull vocals/sounds and love 2 mix them with the breaks..
every powerfull sentence have a music part in my head and so i make music..!! )
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Plasmorh
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Posted : Oct 8, 2010 10:00
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ofc its just like that )
but mby, u could modulate vocal or quantize it for a different sonority so it doesnt give deja vus  PP
still, powerfull track
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knocz
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Posted : Oct 10, 2010 14:50
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The intro and main break seem like they are in different key then the rest of the track, which makes it sound bad imho when the beat comes in;
I also think the kick is too long, giving it too much of a BOOM and muddying up the sound;
I also like it when the music and bassline evolves to something, but the bass is always the same, you could make it more dynamic;
I also would like to hear a better lead after the main break, something on top of that detuned saw played with rhythmic hits, because you've been playing that sound since the beginning of the track.. Can you try putting an arpeggiator on top of that lead, with a 1/8 speed, just to take the longer notes one octave up once in a while, and play with a high pass filter with a whole bunch of resonance on that same lead.
What do you think about that?
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Bosque Sub Zinho
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Posted : Oct 10, 2010 20:55
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On 2010-10-10 14:50, knocz wrote:
The intro and main break seem like they are in different key then the rest of the track, which makes it sound bad imho when the beat comes in;
I also think the kick is too long, giving it too much of a BOOM and muddying up the sound;
I also like it when the music and bassline evolves to something, but the bass is always the same, you could make it more dynamic;
I also would like to hear a better lead after the main break, something on top of that detuned saw played with rhythmic hits, because you've been playing that sound since the beginning of the track.. Can you try putting an arpeggiator on top of that lead, with a 1/8 speed, just to take the longer notes one octave up once in a while, and play with a high pass filter with a whole bunch of resonance on that same lead.
What do you think about that?
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tnx for that great ideas.. i have actually close the same ideas that u have for master finishing the track..
i told in some other topic that i will edit all the tracks i made before i relase my demo album.. so expect unexpectfull.. )
Cheers Isra- Soldier..!! |
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