Ket Sci
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Posted : Apr 10, 2010 03:47:10
hey people
i just uploaded my first chillout track and i enjoyed it so much im starting to produce more of it ... i hope u enjoy it and send some feedback if possible
thanks
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TechMonkey
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Posted : Apr 10, 2010 05:54
I liked it quite a bit. The track definitely evolves as it goes. Some bits felt a bit "2006 ala Entheogenic", but honestly I'd kill to create something like you have. Mind if I ask what software you used?
iTranscendence
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Posted : Apr 12, 2010 08:35
7.5 overall good, but could use some more layered rhythmic interplay and the transitions smoother and more subtle would be a good contrast to the mid-tempo flow. The tabla was nice and so were your melodic rhythms. You might try tweaking some of the midi samples though. The voice samples are a little heavy too, might try melding them into the music more.
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First of all I would like to say I have heard the track on my macbook, so no mix comments from me..
I like your percussion and especially your leads in the mid part, but as itranscendence said, it could use some smoother transitions and some midi tweakings, to create some variation..
Maybe use some of your earlier elements in the last part of the track.. You might have done this, but for me it is a bit difficult to hear...
Ket Sci
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Posted : Apr 13, 2010 15:16
thanks a lot for the feedback ... when i listen to the track again i can see these faults, and it becomes a bit monotonous towards the end ... but as i said it was my first attempt at this style and i'm very happy with the outcome and i'm already producing some new stuff ... thanks for the encouragement
